The Secret Lives of Chimney Pots I

Cluttering above huddled rooftops
Of sprawling villages 
And shy provincial towns;
Rising sharply amidst swooping
Declinations;
Hesitating when gathering at the
Tangled woodland perimeters of
Outlying greenland bounds,
Jostled apex ridges detach among
Themselves...
When habitually roused from early
Mornings
Newly awakened sounds.

Electrical milk floats whir and
Bustle around manna-strewn,
Cherry-blossomed streets;
Clinking bottles in blue
Plastic crates
Rattle in monotonous unison, as,
Disregarded,
The humming buggy clatters and 
Creeps -
Like the lead flashing that skirts
The Stacks,
Where, benched atops -
Resides the secretive brooding 
Lives of chimney tops!

Seated and sullen like sombre
Jurors
In considered repose;
Terraced like football fans;
Smugly ensconced above it all.
Starring across, seemingly
Endless,
Crammed-in red brick rows;
Squatting idly alongside 
Deserted pavements
Braced by the grey concrete kerbs -
That race the patched-up black
Tarmac roads.

Suddenly! The intrusive whistling
Of the jocund paperboy breaks upon
Your shattered window glass;
The young scoundrel never takes
The welcoming path, trekking
Instead - Over your lovingly nurtured 
And well manicured front lawn 
Grass!
Like the old shaded Tom he 
Stealthily steals...
When bringing the freshly printed 
Reams of bad and despondent news:
Heralded within many labored 
Rotations 
Of his furiously peddled wheels.

For so it is that every working 
Day
The greater majority rub the 
Gritty sand from out of their 
Heavy and weary eyes;
Then, when complying to the 
Insistence of the agitated alarm,
Stretch out, yawn, and, like 
Orderly troops, 
Obediently rise.
The backbone of your economies...
Or so we have heard it said:
The unmentioned un-redoubtables:
Discriminated against, heavily 
Taxed -
And constantly bled!

Slowly but slowly harmonic dawns 
Sweet, liquid chorus
Abates and lapses...
Replaced by the twittering beaks
Of the many varied and 
Vociferous chirping classes.
The smartly booted and suited
Early-riser
Steps out when steadfast front 
Doors purposefully open,
Then, with a backward glance,
And mindful that not a sleeping
Soul should be woken,
Making sure doors are carefully 
Clicked shut,
Striding briskly away - making  
Good his precious time upon foot.

Warming engines, reassuringly 
Ticking over,
Begin to reverse down crunching 
Washed-gravel drives.
Hollow avenues reverberate and 
Echo;
Whilst all the while, as
The mocking incline contrives,
The keep fitter and jogger,
Teeth gritted grimly in pursuit  
Of predetermined style,
Stoutly resolved, strive to
Complete
The last gut-wrenching mile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/1/2017 1:04:00 PM
what year had aught you say ... which warp under house mascarade ing ... wind on wind rapidly blown ... house over thrown ... what oh ye storm correcting barstool stumps ... what govermental crop ing must we speak in pulblic ... what kis has been blown in love from man to man ... what poetical trump ... what say ye there mate ... do the brits still smoke fags ... ha ha ... you write like a zip line ... write on bro ...
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John Fleming
Date: 9/11/2017 3:33:00 AM
Well, Tim, us Brits do most things I suppose...very much like any other nation in that respect: same old hopes, desires, aspirations, fears and worries; I guess all peoples are very much the same in the running of their day to day lives wherever one may go. All the very best, Tim - Cheers! :) john
Date: 8/25/2017 10:42:00 AM
I do love to begin another of your series. I know I will be immersed in another word so different from mine now. Your descriptions are so clear I am there at the top of the street. Thank you for this new adventure.
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Date: 8/25/2017 1:00:00 PM
And thank you, too, Patricia, on your making a start to read through it; let me know what you think...hope it does not disappoint. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 2/16/2017 10:53:00 PM
With all the talking you do in ink I wonder if your tongue ever kinks? Winks winks...you sure can spin a tale!
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Date: 2/26/2017 1:12:00 AM
Hello again, Donna. My apologies for the lateness in replying...Very busy with work at the moment. Thank you for the nice comment - Much appreciated! My very best wishes...And my warmest regards! :) john P.s Funny you should mention the talking: Indeed I am renowned for it - Lol! :)
Date: 10/18/2016 7:22:00 AM
Such vivid images. I can even see the green backdrops. Wonderful words.
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Date: 10/20/2016 4:44:00 AM
Hello, Scott. Always a pleasure to see you putting in an appearance; hope you are in good health and enjoying life! Many thanks, as always, for your kind and generous remarks - Much appreciated! My warmest regards, Scott...And my very best wishes.
Date: 10/1/2016 10:56:00 AM
I breathe it all in the music of your poetry and each and every time I feel the better for it. A Fav!
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:21:00 PM
Hello my dear friend. Apologies for the long delay in answering...I have been taking a rather protracted sabbatical of sorts from my writing; always nice to see you putting in a much welcomed appearance Armand - My very warmest regards as always! :) john
Date: 8/30/2016 4:09:00 AM
I envision you in a room idle with a canvas painting each line to perfection John. A masterpiece for the world to see. INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 9/4/2016 2:33:00 PM
Hi, Pace. What a really lovely thought! Ahhh well...One can dream... :) Glad you have taken a look at the poem, Pace...I intend to add more in the very near future. My warmest regards. :) john
Date: 5/25/2016 7:06:00 AM
Wow, John! A very picturesque poem! Sweet read!
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Date: 5/27/2016 5:10:00 PM
Hello, Kim. Many thanks for the return visit...Always good to make new friends. Glad you enjoyed the poem - Your kind comments are much appreciated! My very best regards, Kim. :) john
Date: 3/18/2016 9:49:00 PM
What wordtacular descriptiveness on something so seemingly mundane as chimneys! Those "furiously peddled wheels" were a great image. I don't know how you write like this, with such elaborate detail ... I wouldn't be able to do it! Ha ha. Cool style, John. Envious, really.
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Date: 3/19/2016 7:31:00 AM
Hi, Tim. First off - Nice to make your acquaintance! Many thanks for the visit and your very kind comments...This is all much appreciated! Will catch up again with you soon, Tim. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 3/15/2016 7:07:00 AM
This is absolutely epic! The imagery here is phenomenal, and it felt like I was reading my own self. Very nice work, John! ~~Phil Tyler
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Date: 3/15/2016 7:23:00 AM
Phil, a pleasure to make your acquaintance. Thanks for your exceedingly kind words - They are most appreciated! Will catch up with you again...You are always most welcome here! My very best regards! :) john
Date: 3/14/2016 5:50:00 PM
The start of a new day, a keen eye that roams over houses and surrounding areas....the poet uses images, similes and a rich descriptive pen to bring all this to life. Great title for an excellent write, John!! #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:26:00 AM
Hi, Paul. Sorry in the delay replying to your comment, very busy of late - My sincere apologies! You are always more than welcome here. Thanks for the visit and kind comments. Catch up with you soon, Paul. All the very best...And warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 3/13/2016 8:03:00 PM
I am with Connie down here. You not only write with ease, but you write with flair. You must have kissed the Blarney Stone!!
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Date: 3/14/2016 12:48:00 PM
Hi, Andrea. You have just accorded me some of the nicest and most generous comments regarding my writing that have ever been awarded me...I am most grateful!! You are always sure to be warmly welcomed here at anytime, Andrea. My very best regards - And heartfelt wishes! :) john
Date: 3/2/2016 5:55:00 AM
This is incredible John! You write with such ease, as if you have a photographic memory. A #7 for me!
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:50:00 AM
Hi, Connie. Good to see you again - I am glad you enjoyed the read! There is a lot more yet...Chimney pots have a story to tell; they see a lot of things, and all from a different perspective! My very best regards and wishes to you, Connie...as always! :) john
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