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The Secret Creek- For My Daughter

Across the brook they are calling me
calling me to join in and be free,
across the ripples they are calling me
to truly learn to be,
and just like a fairy sings cheerily
sings cheerily of the sacred space,
and just like a child I am wearily
creeping closer to the place.

Down by the creek we are listening
listening to the sounds of peace,
down by the creek where the trees do swing
and the rivers bend and crease,
I sit on the edge where the green moss grows
grows so thick I could sleep all day,
I sit on the edge where the crickets crow
and the ripples jump and play.

Up by the rock where the light shines down
and the shadows dance on a moonlit night,
up by the rocks the fairy queen wears her crown
before the days first light,
in the waters deep where I rest my feet
and the fish slip past with their strong thick tails,
in the waters deep where the rivers meet
is where I go by trail.

I will miss this place still so crystal clear
where my heart can rest from its weary past,
I will miss this space but my biggest fear
is that this place won't last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/14/2024 1:25:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:45:00 PM
Laura, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 9/28/2014 8:19:00 PM
Laura what a beautiful write, does so remind me of when I was a child, my cousin and I had so many little secret places with rocks and creeks and imaginary fairies and yes I miss all that, mind you I am 71 now but it is still there in my mind and will be until my demise, take care my Aussie pal..............Vera...........
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Date: 9/22/2014 8:07:00 AM
What a beautiful place you've described.. I'd love to go there.
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:33:00 AM
beautifully written dear, intriguing one...:)
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