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The Secret

2 bodies lie. on the top of the bed with sheets a mess, the demon kissed her neck and the innocent other delicately undressed. his quiet love now asleep. in the warmth of the night she can hear her domineer breathe. and still feels that gentle touch the hand that brushed and traced her cheek. he's fully filled her empty frame. now holds one demon put to rest transferred poison deep in her veins and left nightmares to beat in her chest pulsing his heart to burn into her breast. she shouldn’t know she still submits so sick. so sick and slick.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/15/2008 6:33:00 PM
Awesome write! i've seen this poem before and I hope I took a minute to comment on it's breathtaking climax. You are one talented writer. Thank you for being here, love & peace, Karen
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Date: 8/11/2008 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on this excellent write being featured once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 4:55:00 AM
Andrea - very emotional poem on a very deep subject - Congrats on being featured
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Date: 8/11/2008 3:41:00 AM
Andrea,congratulations on this amazing poem being featured once again. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2008 5:52:00 PM
Comment number three. This one needs to be seen. It is sick, but it happens and the victim is the one who suffers. There is a cry for street justice. Congratulations on "The Secret" being featured again. Vince
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