The Second Lieutenant

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The second lieutenant had a snip, snip For some reasons then it was very hip Told the chief he couldn't stay The chief thought he wanted to play Dropped his drawers his swollen parts to strip Another fire department story... He had a little male surgery. He was suppose to work because the doctor had said that he could come in.. He had developed swelling in his male parts so he showed the chief what was wrong why he could not work..LOL

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Robert Johnson

Date: 5/31/2015 11:07:00 PM

Doesn't sound like the kind of swelling we are after. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/31/2015 5:17:00 AM

what a giggle, sara...I like this side of you, lol... so fine!.. huggs

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/30/2015 7:33:00 PM

Ha, ha, I would have liked to see the look on the chief's face when he dropped his drawers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2015 9:28:00 AM

I am glad you put your note. I didn't realize it was from that operation!! but the snip snip part now makes a lot of sense!!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2015 7:05:00 AM

ha ha ha that is a classic scenario Sara - oh this made me chuckle:-) Hugs Jan xx

Catherine Labeau

Date: 5/30/2015 5:42:00 AM

want that fire man to extinguish and not an axe as they storm your house for a reach to the roof as three building away I am the only with access and I let them in never again as they left me in shamble the tatch open for the rain to come in and not even a thank you