The Second Hand

With every tick, the second hand
Proceeds around the face,
A little like a heartbeat
At a slow and steady pace.

So many clocks and watches, though,
Don’t come so well-equipped
So you might never realize
If some seconds had been skipped.

There’s comfort, then, to check the time
On wall or desk or wrist
And behold the second hand a’tick
With not one second missed.

The irony, of course, is that,
What really is absurd
Is acknowledging the second hand
Is actually the third!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/11/2014 3:54:00 PM
Just like the second hand that ticks the time away all day. Your pen continues to amaze how you mold words of clay. Now this one is as clever as one ever has been done. And for that feat alone accomplished, I say that you have won.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/11/2014 6:11:00 PM
ha! a delightful comment from you, dear robert! i always love to see that you've written something about one of my poems - it makes my day!
Date: 11/10/2014 11:02:00 AM
You are so clever, Ilene! Funny how I never thought of that...I enjoyed! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/11/2014 6:10:00 PM
thanks for reading and commenting, rhonda! i'm appreciative...
Date: 11/10/2014 9:44:00 AM
Your ability to write about such zany topics always intrigues me. I've never thought about the second hand actually being the third before - very apt observation! Enjoyed this one.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/11/2014 6:09:00 PM
thank you, timothy! i write about what i see or hear around me. yesterday, my battery died in my wall clock so i noticed the second hand ticking away when the battery was replaced and voila! a topic appeared! i appreciate your comments...
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