The Seasons of Love

Oh, love in spring, you’re peridot, and new’s the grass; with dew - aglow! On clovered knoll ourselves we fling. You’re peridot, oh love in spring! In summer’s sun, love blazes red, and to the dune at dusk we’re led neath cobalt sky that’s crimson spun. Love blazes red in summer’s sun. When fall arrives, our hues change oft. Like leaves through winds of life we waft. Then comes the chill, but love still thrives. Our hues change oft when fall arrives. When snow descends, we’re changed to white, the color of reflected light. And though we die, pure love transcends. We’re changed to white when snow descends. Submitted June 15, 2022 for Mark Toney's the '2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 2' Poetry Contest
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Watt Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Glorious writing of love and seasons and colors, in the style of the classic Romantic poets. This was bookmarked as one of my favorites in your Seasonal-Go-Round chapbook, and a delight to read again (sending to my Favs here, finally). Warm congratulations on your podium finish, dear friend. Summer's almost here!
Watt Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 2:26 PM
It doesn't seem you need that list after all... you've been a winner in the first 3 marathon contests!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 2:22 PM
John, I need that list of your favorites again. hahaha. I see you are doing really well in the marathon. So proud of you!
Ashley Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Oh, this is simply exquisite, Andrea. The depth of your beautiful talent radiates in this piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Lol ... "The word peridot, I did not know. But now I do because of you! You can also pronounce it with the "T" - fine for some, but not for me!" Andrea, I enjoyed your progression of the seasons of love. As I read this I see my wife and me in late fall. (That's my story and I'm stickin' to it.) Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 2 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon contest. Mile 3 has already started!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Thanks so much, Mark. I actually won a monetary award on this one in a ShadowPoetry contest a long time ago so it's very special to me, and I am so happy you liked it. (I always pronounced peridot without the t, so I guess we both learned something!!)
Babcock Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 3:17 PM
A true gem of a poem. love phyl
Davis Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Andrea What a stunning and wonderfully written poem, full of imagery and sweetness that touches the reader in a gentle and kind way. Thank you for the great comment on my Revised Group poem. Yes, I am either going to put that one or the original version in the contest. Not sure which one yet.
Mcleod Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 12:01 AM
That's another masterpiece for you Andrea. I only wish I had as large a vocabulary as you. You use is very well an in great poetic form. Your words flow and that is priceless!
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 6:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your beautiful poem, once again, Andrea. It was nice to see this one on the winner's list! Congratulations to you, as well!...Thank you so much for the kind comments. :)
A   Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 5:49 PM
AWESOME,,,, ANDREA.... LOVE IT...PD
Phookan Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 10:48 AM
This is a very graceful poem with beautiful lyrical emotions flowing in the lines as love grows, matures and transcends! I liked how you flipped the two sections of L1 and L4 in the stanzas, that was really very nicely done. Congrats Andrea on a fine win and thank you soooo much for honoring my contest. Love you dear,, huggs!!!
Hamilton Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:51 AM
congrats on win Andrea a fine pen, love transcends all ever timeless hugs
Stephens Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Hi Andrea, Beautifully drawn seasons with a rare fragility thread running throughout. Well done for a worthy win. Regards Theresa xx
Mehta Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 1:56 AM
An apt form you have chosen for the theme of your poem. Congrats on the fine win,andrea
A  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:11 AM
HEY ANDREA:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 10:58 PM
wow, you're my fav, so I'm biased to rate this highly. this is quatrain was crafted with skill. always a pleasure to read your poetry congratulations on your glory. cheers!
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 2:50 PM
another beauty here, my friend - will have to look up peridot, LOL
Watson Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Another Andrea classic , Beautiful my friend.
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:35 PM
For dabbling, you have written very masterfully. Beautiful write Andrea.
Carrillo Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 11:32 AM
The Seasons of Love is beautiful and it will do great in the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 10:26 PM
For dabbling it leaves me breathless....awesome Andrea...
Deschler Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 9:41 PM
A beautifully written swap quatrain, Andrea. The imagery is so stunning! I really enjoyed reading your poem tonight. You will place high with this one. Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for all of the kind comments today. :)
Dunn Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Loveyy to read your beautiful vision of spring great natural picture written within your lovely words. cheri glad by the way that you enjoyed my Sin Bad.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:17 PM
OMG this is sooooo beautiful Andrea! Please send it over to PFT too! I just adored it. It is going into my fat file of your favorites. Your writing is right up there with the Master poets of the now and the past.
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 1:47 PM
You know what I will write, don't you? Superb, my dear...all the seasons...you bring to life with the breath of love infused in every line. Beautiful...and yes, I do teach English....remedial courses but also English Composition I...a university course, and I have taught an Argumentative Writing course.
Carroll Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 12:16 PM
A lovely write Andrea..
Anish Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 10:54 AM
This is beautiful! I must look up the word "peridot" in the dictionary. Good luck in the contest Matthew Anish
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