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The Season Inside

Its beauty yet again plunders me, Into magnificent realms that hide Deep within my every thought Where I ,like a new tenant, Seek comfort to reside In the warm abodes of Winter. It has come yet again With its white painted sky Like a dripping white towel Whose waters slowly subside Like a pain that has been eluded, Avoided, denied Its gusts that blow across The many prolonging miles Bringing all windows to shudder Like lost whispers and voices Found and compiled Into a vague resonance. Its unmelted snow That at every corner lies Lingering for the tepid Sun of Spring to rise To melt away Like an unwanted memory. And all that it holds Is but a fraction that glides Within, A sheer reflection of the world Outside The snow, wind and rain of The season inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2016 10:03:00 AM
It seems I have already commented in your most recent poems, so I had to dig deep into your archives of poems and I am glad I came across this. A lovely poem friend.
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:40:00 AM
Powerful imagery; Congratulations on making it into the first round... God Bless, Dima
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:06:00 PM
Good use of imagery!! Much for the reader to think about in this poem. Wow! Congratulations on your well-deserved feature. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:47:00 PM
Farrah~ WOW Congratulations on a terrific featured poem! Love Laura :)
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on the feature, Farah. Vince
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations Farah on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:08:00 PM
Congrats Farah on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent choice to feature and share... with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:04:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Farah. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2010 3:14:00 PM
Farah~ Such beauty and depth in your words a wonderful written poem! Love Laura :0)
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:02:00 AM
excellent!
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Date: 2/23/2010 1:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem, love Simone
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:23:00 PM
:) Beautiful my friend.. Beautiful :)
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:41:00 PM
This , to me , is a beautifully expressed poem with a sensitive feel that comes across easily . great, Farah.
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:15:00 AM
Splendid, Farah! So well written! Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your comment...Have agood time...Gert
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:11:00 PM
Farah, this is absolutely beautiful. The rhythm gives it an almost sad fluidity, and the imagery beautifully portrays the oftentimes tumultuous but beautiful depth of human emotion. Favorite line: "In the warm abodes of Winter" Very, very well done. God bless. ~Mahmood
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Date: 1/9/2010 12:00:00 AM
incredible farah, beautiful in every syllable. the flow of your writing sways it's rhythm. I am awed. love, sami.
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Date: 12/26/2009 5:28:00 PM
Farah ~ such a gifted girl you are I always look to read anything new you've written A wonderful job on this beautiful poem! Laura :)
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Date: 12/26/2009 10:44:00 AM
This is very beautiful- there is no winter inside your gentle soul, is there?:) Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/21/2009 7:37:00 AM
a beautiful you have here... l\each line filled with so much creativity and love for the art of writing. Enjoyed this poetry and enjoy your day. :)
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Date: 12/19/2009 12:57:00 AM
The word "beautiful" does not begin to describe your lovely poem. This word is like your "tepid sun of Spring" - it has only begun to do it's work. Thank you Farah.
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Date: 12/19/2009 12:54:00 AM
Picturesque poetry Farah,lovely phrasing,full of inner poems.Rgds Brian & thank for your kind words and comments.May your talent blossom in new directions in 2010
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Date: 12/18/2009 12:10:00 PM
Thought provoking poem with good imagery. Your talent shines in this poem. I say bring on spring! Unfortunately, I've got awhile to wait here in North Dakota. Hope all is going well with you. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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