The Sea-Shell Game

The tide came in and took our towers made of sand,
Like some mad giant smashing castles with his hand,
While our drifting dreams were drowning in the waves, 
 The ocean took our castles to their graves.

I wrote the letters of your name upon the shore,
But the tide erased my message with a roar,
And after it had rolled away, it left behind
A shifting beach of shining shells for us to find.

One of us has changed, and one is still the same:
We really never win or lose the sea-shell game.

We tried to hear ourselves above the pounding sea,
All we heard were echoes of what used to be;
Our bodies came together like they used to do,
But all we heard was silence after we were through.

One of us has changed, and one is still the same:
We never really win or lose the sea-shell game.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's (Any Which Way) contest Steve. Love, Carol
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April 3, 2010 at 2:50 AM
This is a wonderful write, my congratulations to your winning this contest, Steve. (^_^) Noel
Richards Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Congratulations on this winner!! Great poem! Love, Carrie
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Congrats on the win. I like the poem.
White Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:25 PM
I like it Congrats Steve crafty- Congrats
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 9:54 AM
CLongratulations with your win with this good poem. Joyce
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March 31, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on placing third in Brian's contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:55 AM
I wish this poem could be published..it is a wonderful piece..think about it. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
Murphy Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:52 AM
very nice congrats on your win faleshia
Murphy Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:38 AM
cograts on your placement in the contest faleshia
Strand Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest.Rgds Brian.
Strand Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 1:12 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian
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