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The Sea's Memories

As the sun sets and the tide rolls in covering the memories of its adventurous past Like a warm blanket they are tucked in and sent to slumber Till the new day begins Where once again They will be showcased in the sun's spotlight 7/5/2017

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Jackie Elston

Date: 7/6/2017 11:50:00 AM

it captures lovely images and long gone exotic travels l had ,of warm evening dips in the sea, as the sun goes down. Beautiful.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/6/2017 11:52:00 AM

Thank you, Jackie :) for the view and great comment!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/6/2017 10:53:00 AM

Then, you can make more memories:) Nice write, Jeremy!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/6/2017 11:21:00 AM

Thanks, Daniel :) for the view and complement :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/6/2017 6:20:00 AM

This is beautiful Jeremy :)

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/6/2017 6:21:00 AM

Thanks, I was prompted by a pic and wrote trying to use brevity :)