The Sea-Man's Return

Swept away
the last colour 
of sunset,
Ocean in his eyes,
winds  and waves
the sea-man loved.

Forever gone
the late-song
of night birds,
crushed corals,
sand and rocks
the sea-man loved.

Blown afar
the harvest seeds,
Flowers in his heart,
Petals in bloom,
Pale-pink blossoms
the sea-man loved.

Found and lost
the light of stars,
Alone He sailed 
through narrow paths,
to mountain'shadows
the sea-man loved.

In hope to smell
the scent of her hair,
In hope to wipe
rain off her lips,
In hope to taste
her roasting- chestnuts,

to mend regrets
with just one kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Babcock Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Love the romantic write. love phyl
Goff Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Beautiful comments! Char! I concur!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 9:38 PM
A lovely read and a kind thought for the Sea-Man..,subtle coloring and seashells and sand and love;-)
Hill Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Certainly a pleasure to read your thoughts once again...TAH
Theraven Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Charmaine, So nice to find this poem this fine evening. I read all the comments from your well wishing poet friends. Your poem reminded, how I miss the solitary life of the Sea. I recall days of angry crested waves, spray of foam, the deep grey troughs of a sea state 7, often made the horizon disappear, seeming to swallow our little ship. Thanks for reminding me. -Richard
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September 28, 2019 at 12:17 PM
Oh, it is so wonderful to read your poetry again, Charmaine. There are never enough uplifting, romantic poems to read here. I delight in your words and hope you and Christina are well and happy! Hugs, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:23 AM
this is really beautiful
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:54 PM
Thanks so much Jack Horne.
Capitano Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Beautiful write Charmaine, what romantic longing looks like. Kudos.
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Thanks for reading Phil.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:16 AM
What love should be....wonderful;-)
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Hi keith ,Thanks for reading.
A. Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Wow! I absolutely love the last stanza.
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Hey..Thanks for reading James.Am so glad you love it .Hope to see some new posts from you too.
Callus Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 5:15 PM
There is so much poignant beauty in your words, Charm! It has been a while since you last posted, but it was worth the wait! A fav for me. ~ Warm regards, my friend. // paul
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Am so glad you stop by Paul.Thanks so much for reading.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 6:53 PM
a familar theme of yours but in a very different way, seeing it as the things the sea-man loves. I just saw a mermaid contest and was thinking when I clicked on this, maybe it's a mer-man!!Anyway, you always write so charmingly. No wonder your name is Charma. Thanks for your sweet words at my poems, my friend.
Chircop Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Thanks for your input sweet Andrea...So happy you stopped by :)
One Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Love he format of this poem, i was thinking of doing something in a similar style, has been a while since i wrote like this...if only a kiss could mend regrets...
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 5:19 PM
Thanks Silent One...In reality a kiss won't mend regrets..but that is what's beautiful in poetry...We can write dreams .Thanks for stopping by :)
There Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Whew! That last line is so simple yet so very powerful ~ I really enjoyed this.
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Thanks so much.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:21 PM
I simply love this. It's a awesome write. Blessings for you
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Thanks so much
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September 18, 2019 at 7:49 PM
A poetic write that has romance slathered all over it and through it also. "In hope to smell the scent of her hair, In hope to wipe rain off her lips, In hope to taste her roasting- chestnuts," - WOW!
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment.
Hamilton Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:32 PM
What a touching story Charma, so glad you're posting again, beautiful writing!
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Thanks so much John :)
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Charmaine! Beautiful poem and going into FAVs! "In hope to wipe rain off her Lips! You are truly a unique poet and my inspiration. Panagiota Thank you again for acknowledging my Haiku today!
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Thanks for your kindness..I am honoured by your comment..Thanks for reading.
Seal Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:32 PM
ah, the choices we have to make, beautifully expressed. Long time no see Charmy, hope all is well with you. Take care Richard
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Hi Richard..I'm fine Thanks..Just too busy to have decent time to read you all my friends ..and to find some time to write..but am trying to be here every now and then.Thanks for reading and for your kind comment.
Green Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Look who snuck back in and posted something wonderful for us to find. Hey there Charmaine, it is so nice to see you again and to see your poetry again. This was beautiful, oh what he wouldn't do for that kiss, to mend those long held regrets. I loved the journey your poem took me on today. I hope you plan on sticking around for a while. It is wonderful to see you here again.
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Hello Chris...I am doing my best to find some time to be able to read all my poet friends ..you included..Thanks for stopping by with your kind comment.
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