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This poem is about an old sailor and love for the sea and the friends he made recalling his adventures upon the waters.

Seafarer sat by the turbulent sea Watching the offing and watching the waves; Smiling with small teeth, the color of tea Recalling journeys and the friends he’d made; Photographs earmarking the good ole days, The mariner clutched inside his hands He long for the billows, brine, and the glade - To brave the waves on his boat once again “Clarice and I, sailed the seven seas!” He’d boast to beachgoers every day Vivid tales, made him a celebrity As he talked about quests in lands far away The people convened at summer’s end To make the seafarer’s wish come true They repaired the sailor’s battered friend - So he could return to the oceans blue Seafarer sat on the turbulent sea Watching the offing and watching the waves; Smiling with small teeth, the color of tea Recalling journeys and the friends he’d made;

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Date: 12/23/2018 9:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Valerie, with great imagery. If this had something about a lighthouse guiding their way it would be perfect for my Lighthouse contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family and friends. Hugs Eve.~`*
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Valerie Staton
Date: 12/31/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thank you Eve! I appreciate your feedback. Happy New Year's!
Date: 12/19/2018 1:18:00 PM
Love the vivid imagery this creates in my mind. Reminds me a bit of my own titled This Man Is An Island, in the overall feel.
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Valerie Staton
Date: 12/19/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Michael. Happy holidays!
Date: 12/12/2018 4:57:00 AM
Love the line: Smiling with small teeth, the color of tea. A beautiful tale of friendship and memories. Beautiful, Valerie! Fave!
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Valerie Staton
Date: 12/31/2018 10:10:00 AM
Thank you! Your opinion means a lot.

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