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The Sea of Life

As the moon bled Into the night, The waves danced With the lilting wind, He stood there Remembering her, How their souls merged Like the sand And the sea, She was the flower He, her perfume, She was the sea nymph He, her song, She was the breeze He, her direction, She was the polestar He, her night sky, She, the butterfly He, her wings, She, the hummingbird He, her nectar, She was the silence, He, her voice, She was the poem, He, her words, Together they Blended well, Leaving footprints In the sea of life. 04.09.2021
For Robert's "Relationships" contest

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Date: 7/29/2021 9:39:00 AM
How sweet and lovely. Excellent, congratulations.
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Date: 7/29/2021 6:49:00 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
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Date: 4/28/2021 12:07:00 PM
This is without a doubt one of your best writes Jo, an obvious fave for me, seems like it will be a winner, it is for me!
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Date: 4/23/2021 11:52:00 AM
Zowie Jo! This is stunningly beautiful! I absolutely loved it and I hope it is a top winner. Straight into my faves my friend. This poem drips romance and love. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/9/2021 12:52:00 PM
hello Jo Daniel, Wow! I am making this poem my faV. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 4/9/2021 5:48:00 AM
Brilliantly articulated, Jo. Enjoyed the rhythms of love footprints.
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Date: 4/9/2021 1:53:00 AM
Great contrasts between male and female. A delicious poem.
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