The Sea of Life

As the moon bled Into the night, The waves danced With the lilting wind, He stood there Remembering her, How their souls merged Like the sand And the sea, She was the flower He, her perfume, She was the sea nymph He, her song, She was the breeze He, her direction, She was the polestar He, her night sky, She, the butterfly He, her wings, She, the hummingbird He, her nectar, She was the silence, He, her voice, She was the poem, He, her words, Together they Blended well, Leaving footprints In the sea of life. 04.09.2021
For Robert's "Relationships" contest
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Evans Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 9:39 AM
How sweet and lovely. Excellent, congratulations.
One Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
Hamilton Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 12:07 PM
This is without a doubt one of your best writes Jo, an obvious fave for me, seems like it will be a winner, it is for me!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Zowie Jo! This is stunningly beautiful! I absolutely loved it and I hope it is a top winner. Straight into my faves my friend. This poem drips romance and love. Blessings xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 12:52 PM
hello Jo Daniel, Wow! I am making this poem my faV. Enjoy your day my friend.
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Brilliantly articulated, Jo. Enjoyed the rhythms of love footprints.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 1:53 AM
Great contrasts between male and female. A delicious poem.
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