The Sea Hag and the Funky Monkey

She came out of the sea at twilight
Weak and trembling, bent with age
Her hair entwined with seaweed
The pounding surf a watery stage. .

She stood awhile and listened
then with the most frightful groan
Beaconed with a bony finger
To her minions in the foam..

Out of the waves they scrambled
Creatures from the dark and deep
Unleashed this one dark night
From their prison did they creep..

The danced the Funky Monkey
while the stars shown overhead
With abandon celebrated freedom
From their dark and watery bed...

So had the sun and stars aligned
Just this once in untold years
To break the spell they suffered
And dry their unending tears..  

And with the light of faintest dawn
They turned from their heavenly shore
All crept back into the thrashing sea
And their likes were seen no more



I wrote this with my grandson several years ago..i thought it would be fun to bring it back again..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/11/2014 6:15:00 AM
What fun Even better out loud intesting use of beaconed in the second stanza rather thna the rther ordinary beckoned
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Date: 10/22/2014 4:58:00 AM
A delightful story, well told...
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Date: 10/19/2014 6:46:00 PM
How creative, all those creatures dancing the funky monkey with the Sea Hag and then never seen again as they disappear back into the sea. your lucky grandson to do this with you. How old is he now?
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/19/2014 7:03:00 PM
Hard to believe, but he will soon be 14. He still likes poetry, can still recite Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening..I don't see him much as he is living in Wi now. Coming for Xmas!!
Date: 10/17/2014 12:16:00 PM
Congratz on your win! ^^
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Date: 10/16/2014 8:30:00 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Barbara.
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Date: 10/16/2014 7:09:00 AM
I wish I could have been there to watch them do the funky monkey.....lol...Congrats on your win....
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Date: 10/16/2014 5:24:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Barbara. A great write
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:32:00 PM
No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!
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Date: 10/15/2014 3:42:00 AM
Loved to read today, awesome write n thnx for sharing your old marvel that cud bring fun n smiles Barbara!
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