Brenda Victoria Northeast Poet Free verse

The Sculptors Pen

The sculptor’s pen writes my pain
Etched words flow in my veins
I writhe inside- distorted  
I am controlled 
Not by what I want
But by a vision 
Perceived
Inside
The 
Sculptors
Mind
Upon the 
Floor
discarded
Scattered
Askew
His
Ideas
Control
What
I do
 
 ©? Brenda V Northeast   13th January 2012

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Joe Maverick January 15, 2012 at 1:16 AM I see the inspiration writes through you Brenda..! this is all to the "greater good" welcome aboard..) Brenda Victoria Northeast January 15, 2012 at 2:29 AM Thank you so much Joe and your kind welcome, Blessings to you, Bren : )

James Marshall Goff January 14, 2012 at 11:37 PM Brenda....I can smell a flower that drifts between these lines (I'm serious) delightful! fragrant! jimbo Brenda Victoria Northeast January 15, 2012 at 12:59 AM oh James that is so, so sweet, thank you, blessings to you too, Brenda : )

Judy Ball January 14, 2012 at 6:21 AM Hmmmm Lots of emotion here. "The sculptor's pen writes my pain." Guess it depends upon who the Sculptor is. I like to think the Sculptor is God slowly chipping away all the bad stuff to reveal the beauty inside. Nice piece here. Good imagery. God Bless, JB Nice to meet you Brenda. Please peek in again. Brenda Victoria Northeast January 14, 2012 at 7:39 AM You Too Judy I am so thrilled to meet so many nice people here, blessings, Bren It is funny where these thoughts come from, on reflection, I think it is like a writer writes the characters in their novels or whatever and some land on the floor screwed up to be later rewrites : )

Jim Pemberton January 14, 2012 at 6:09 AM Very thoughtful and creative poem! Blessings to you!!! Brenda Victoria Northeast January 14, 2012 at 7:35 AM Thank you Jim : )

Dinda Minardi January 14, 2012 at 6:05 AM The sculptor's pen writes your pain, you got me i this line.. loved this verse. Deeply written. Thanks for your kind comment on my page, Brenda :). Brenda Victoria Northeast January 14, 2012 at 7:34 AM Thank you Dinda blessings, Bren : )

M.I.A . January 14, 2012 at 3:19 AM very well-penned poem Brenda! i love the flow here Brenda Victoria Northeast January 14, 2012 at 7:33 AM Thank you Mia : )

Greg Stanley January 13, 2012 at 8:30 PM Such a beautiful poem, so creative and I enjoyed it very much, Greg Brenda Victoria Northeast January 13, 2012 at 8:55 PM Thank you Greg, : )