Joanna Daniel Poet Monorhyme

The Scrunch

Jack once had a romantic hunch,
Impressed Jess with a flower bunch,
Invited her to Sunday lunch,
They had grilled steak and nuts to munch,
Tried to kiss her, she packed a punch,
Now he walks about with a scrunch.


06.07.2021

For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Poem no. 5" contest

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Sara Kendrick June 12, 2021 at 4:40 AM Cute one. I am guessing she did not like that attempt at a kiss. Reads like a good contender to me way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith June 11, 2021 at 8:43 AM Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Thanks for the laugh. Enjoy your win with blessings................

Jan Allison June 10, 2021 at 3:53 PM what a witty poem congrats on your win Jo, your poem sure packs a punch!:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman June 10, 2021 at 10:12 AM Witty monorhyme Jo. Well done. Actions do have some lasting consequences! Blessings to you.

Paul Callus June 10, 2021 at 10:02 AM An enjoyable poem, Jo. I believe poor Jack had had little experience with women!:) I am sure after this 'lesson' he'll change tactics :) ~ Best regards // paul

Jenna Logan June 10, 2021 at 6:49 AM What a cad! Congrats on your winning placement, Jo.

Regina Mcintosh June 10, 2021 at 5:09 AM Adorable. Congrats with love, God bless you, Always, Gina

Rama Balasubramanian June 9, 2021 at 10:36 PM Nice rhyme, made me smile. Congratulations

Christuraj Alex June 9, 2021 at 10:29 PM Nice Rhyme. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet June 7, 2021 at 10:26 AM Superb monorhyme poem, Jo, I like the sound and the lovely tune, best wishes in the contest, have a blessed day.

Alexis Y. June 7, 2021 at 9:04 AM Hi Jo, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Heidi Sands June 7, 2021 at 6:00 AM Great one Jo. Smoothly written monorhyme :)

Victor Buhagiar June 7, 2021 at 5:18 AM Jack is an inexperienced lover. One lunch does not give him the right to become so familiar with a friend.