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The Scrunch

Jack once had a romantic hunch, Impressed Jess with a flower bunch, Invited her to Sunday lunch, They had grilled steak and nuts to munch, Tried to kiss her, she packed a punch, Now he walks about with a scrunch. 06.07.2021 For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Poem no. 5" contest

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Date: 6/12/2021 4:40:00 AM
Cute one. I am guessing she did not like that attempt at a kiss. Reads like a good contender to me way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/11/2021 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Thanks for the laugh. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 6/10/2021 3:53:00 PM
what a witty poem congrats on your win Jo, your poem sure packs a punch!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2021 10:12:00 AM
Witty monorhyme Jo. Well done. Actions do have some lasting consequences! Blessings to you.
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Date: 6/10/2021 10:02:00 AM
An enjoyable poem, Jo. I believe poor Jack had had little experience with women!:) I am sure after this 'lesson' he'll change tactics :) ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 6/10/2021 6:49:00 AM
What a cad! Congrats on your winning placement, Jo.
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Date: 6/10/2021 5:09:00 AM
Adorable. Congrats with love, God bless you, Always, Gina
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:36:00 PM
Nice rhyme, made me smile. Congratulations
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:29:00 PM
Nice Rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/7/2021 10:26:00 AM
Superb monorhyme poem, Jo, I like the sound and the lovely tune, best wishes in the contest, have a blessed day.
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Date: 6/7/2021 9:04:00 AM
Hi Jo, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 6/7/2021 6:00:00 AM
Great one Jo. Smoothly written monorhyme :)
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Date: 6/7/2021 5:18:00 AM
Jack is an inexperienced lover. One lunch does not give him the right to become so familiar with a friend.
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