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The Scream

The darkness comes in bleeding sorrow when Autumn calls and summer’s dying light fades to cold, shadow filled dusk, as the quiet stillness of the invading night falls, once again, broken on deathly gleaming bloodshot eyes. She knows what they want with their vulgar words and catcalls. They have been here before but on this night she feels fear. The coolness of the air seems foreboding as time crawls past midnight and their looming presence fills the shadows. A cross dangles low atop her layered camisoles. Clutching it she whispers a prayer; the night goes still. With handsome, quiet demeanor her flight he forestalls. “Calm my sweet,” his deep voice offers as his cape appears and her scream of morbid fear, echoes off of the walls.
10/06/2017

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Date: 11/14/2017 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, James. Its a scary one really :-) . I liked the Title too..
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James Inman
Date: 11/14/2017 3:56:00 AM
Thank you Betsy.
Date: 11/9/2017 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations, James on your great win.
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James Inman
Date: 11/10/2017 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Subimal.
Date: 11/9/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, James - keep up the great writing! :-)
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James Inman
Date: 11/9/2017 10:16:00 PM
Thanks for the nice visit Gregory.
Date: 11/9/2017 6:47:00 PM
such a scary write James many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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James Inman
Date: 11/9/2017 10:16:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you. I'm a creepy kind of a guy (maybe that's not such a good thing). : )
Date: 10/16/2017 9:53:00 PM
You have so carefully crafted this as to be beguiling. Neither sparse nor verbose but just as it should be: thickly compelling and right on topic.
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James Inman
Date: 10/17/2017 7:51:00 AM
Thank you again Mark. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 10/9/2017 9:53:00 AM
James this is so real and frightening. It really captures the serious side of Halloween not as a fun trick or treat theme but a very Dracula (Dark Shadows)creation that takes the reader to the highest level of a frightening reality. Love how you bring the ending together and let us know, through his cape appears. Exceptional entry, my favorite so far for this contest.
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2017 10:01:00 AM
I was looking for something a little more chilling and dark Michael. Thank you.
Date: 10/9/2017 6:43:00 AM
Very apt poem for this contest--well written, scary--best for a win!
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 10/9/2017 12:45:00 AM
Really scary. An unusual Halloween poem. Wish you best for contest. I have not ventured yet
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. Give it a try.
Date: 10/6/2017 8:34:00 PM
oh how creepy GOOD, Ralph. I love your entry. Hope I can do one this good. It's not the usual silly type of Halloween poetry. It is truly a great write.
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James Inman
Date: 10/6/2017 11:52:00 PM
Can't wait to read yours Andrea. Thanks.

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