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The Scraping of Pain's Shovels

Scooping up my pain with these shovels as I try to write, embracing all I lost in a life I never knew I deserved. Keeping forgiveness and empathy in my clear sight, and trying to remember all the love I have reserved. I was scraping these shovels and they quickly swerved, so, I take the dustpan and try to make things right. Should I excavate the anguish and forget the pain? Maybe the torment will cease and I will be free. I could only hope that the happy memories remain allowing this woman to be no one else except me. The scraping of these shovels has made me see clearly. The chafing and attrition have taken my life in vain. The metal on the cement gives me relief, yet fear. It screeches and moans the emotions I never knew I’d feel when I looked at the world in a shattered mirror. Believe me when I say the scratching is so true as I live a life of abrasion with my construction crew- explaining the scraping sound to all who will hear. March 10, 2019 John Lawless The Scraping of Shovels

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Date: 3/16/2019 12:25:00 PM
I could feel the intensity of emotions in your well penned poem, Laura Loo! Well done! Congrats to your win! :)
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Date: 3/16/2019 12:31:00 PM
many thanks sweet Laura, have a great day :)-luloo
Date: 3/16/2019 10:44:00 AM
you sure love your metaphors LuLoo! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/16/2019 12:31:00 PM
yes I do! thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 3/16/2019 9:51:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Lu Loo! GREAT metaphors! Janice
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Date: 3/16/2019 12:31:00 PM
thank you so much sweet Janice :)-luloo
Date: 3/16/2019 9:39:00 AM
"explaining the scraping sound to all who will hear".. A marvelous use of metaphor within the contest theme, the haunting anguish of how long and how deep to continue digging.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/16/2019 12:31:00 PM
I'm honored you liked my poem John, thank you so very much...:)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2019 1:25:00 PM
A nice image, the shovel. Very well written, Lu Loo.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2019 7:22:00 AM
many thanks tiker :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2019 1:09:00 PM
A deep excavation, brilliantly told, my best to you in the contest Lu Loo! xomo
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2019 7:22:00 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

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