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The Scow

The Scow Unsteady on the bow he stands As waves wash o're the deck Upon "The Scow" is heard...ALL HANDS To help avert a wreck. Each night the stars convey our path To south seas we are bound... But tempted we, Poseidon's wrath... Now pray we're not all drowned As lightning strikes the Quarter Mast Great billows sweep him fore Beyond the bow...his eyes are glassed... Each sailor watched him soar. A sinister, surmounting cloud Impales its inky heap And pulls us down...the depths we plowed... Through boneyards of the deep. 2.25.2017©deborah burch Quatrain

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Date: 3/5/2017 2:00:00 PM
Nice feel of a great pirate poem. Paints a stark picture of a rough voyage.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/5/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thank you David for you kindness. :)
Date: 2/28/2017 11:32:00 PM
Not messing about here, Deb. : ) It hails of all the magic, mystery and danger of the deep ocean. And - barely over half a year until September 19.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/2/2017 5:50:00 PM
Indeed!!! Thank you bunches Doug! Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 2/28/2017 5:58:00 AM
Makes me want to growl, Arrrrrr Matey. :) This was very good Deb. I like the feeling I experienced when reading this.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/28/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Chris...so good to see you here. Hope all is well with you. :) big hugs deb

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