The Scent of You

The scent of you still lingers on
within the soul of each new day;
evocative, my thoughts replay
the times we shared, now sadly gone.

You were my star, you brightly shone
to warm the hours when life was grey.
The scent of you still lingers on
within the soul of each new day.

The soft white shirt of yours I don
still wears a hint of your bouquet.
In death, some things cannot decay,
and of those things your soul is one;
the scent of you still lingers on.


** for Jared Pickett's 'The Rondel' contest
Can someone advise, are Rondel and Rondeau the same? Thanks :)
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Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Congrats Sharon your your big win in Jared's contest with this awesome write and win.. enjoy .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii...
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Rondel". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:48 AM
touchingly romantic! a great win for you! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on this touching, and heart wrenching poem, Sharon! Lovely writing for this challenging form! ~ Love, Carrie
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June 6, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Beauty engraved on paper. Love Roger x
Strand Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Like the kyrielle aroma in this one Sharon.rgds Brian
Knop Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Excellent write, Sharon! enjoyed reading it this afternoon and best of luck in the contest! Thank you for your comments, I'll try my best in the future with my translations and have a great Sunday..Gert
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June 5, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Marvellous poem,scenting the air,Celene.
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 3:14 AM
What beautiful poetry this is Sharon, although sad it's terrific. Good luck in Jared's contest with this Gem. Have a lovely weekend >> James
K. Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 8:19 PM
This is such a beautiful rondel, Sharon--I really like the refrain that you chose :) I'm sure this will do well in the contest!
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Rondel and Rondeau are similiar but not the same...Good luck in the contest...Donely nicely so that the repeating lines are really obvious...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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June 4, 2010 at 2:18 PM
nice write,,, enjoyed
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