The Scent of Their Soul

Once they walked many parts of this land
A people tall and tanned
They travelled along lines of song
Together banded by brother and sister strong
Their language bares the scent of their soul 
In rock art lining walls of ancient water holes
It speaks through spirits of ancestor’s old
Fragrant of Country so olden, before even dreamtime stories told
A soul descendant from Wadjina 
Bonded inextricably to land and culture
The creator of Country, of woman and man
It whispers between cathedrals of rock
Soulful ghosts - protector of past and present 
Through their ceremonies 
The young one’s listen through eye’s bold
Watching shadows dance round camp fire told
The scent of their soul
It lingers in the dust
In the ashes 
In the creeks
It reeks of treachery past
A colonial collision
A mismatch of missions
Some stand up and listen
Others drown Christened
It’s time to give in to worry
It’s time to say sorry...


18 Oct 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ngoma Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 2:13 AM
A very sad past Mark..ignorance meets arrogance and the direconscequences for an innocence of an entire people's demise..it takes bravery to tussle such histories...rgds, Thabang
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October 23, 2014 at 2:27 AM
A very powerful write, Mark. The souls of the past are closer than we think. They are all around us to teach lessons and pass down their valuable knowledge, if we would only listen.... I really enjoyed this heartfelt poem. Very nicely done! Congrats on your well deserved win!
Trichet Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Kelly, glad you enjoyed it too. The Aust govt in the end did formally apologise to the Aboriginal people. It was a start...
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Very beautiful poem Mark and it touched me deeply. I feel it is the best one I read here. Congratulations on your win.
Trichet Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Thanks Brenda thats very kind of you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Manassian Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 6:24 AM
What an amazing poem, Mark. This is beautiful...and so deserving of winning. I like to fight for the rights of those forgotten too. For me, it is the Armenian Genocide that is...as yet, unrecognized by the US. You have captured the essence og the souls of those natives who were mistreated so long ago. I applaud you.
Trichet Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Jade - I will spare a thought for those in Armenia too
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 3:29 AM
Beautifully penned many congrats on your win mark:-) hugs jan xxx
Trichet Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Thankyou Jan
Kayode Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:09 AM
It is nice to see this perfection on the winning list,congrats Mark.
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October 26, 2014 at 6:01 PM
THANKS! Appreciate your kind commenst
Yvonne Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Trichet Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Thanks Maurice
Yvonne Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 8:37 PM
This is excellent Mark.
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