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The Scent of Earth

THE SCENT OF EARTH
Modern cities have grown in all possible direction Captured by construction, expanses of soil aren’t seen I live in a concrete jungle, our avant-garde creation An uprooted tree, at all times I feel suffocated within I wish so much I could go back where I had once been. I remember fondly the green hamlet where I was born On my eyes childhood memories hang like framed picture The grass-covered land rolled with trees to the horizon The land and the sky made for me an enchanting pair I grew up there imbibing the pristine elements of nature. After the scorching summer when the first rains fell In relief the parched soil sighed exhaling the scent of earth Embraced me with aromatic arms of nature I knew so well The scent still wafts in me, nobody in city knows its worth With the first rain I’ll return to a green land in my next birth.
February 18, 2018.

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Date: 4/1/2018 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations, Subimal. I've had the pleasure of discerning the smell of city environment and mountainous forest environment. I'll take green acres any day. Well deserved win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:26:00 PM
Thank you, Randy so much.
Date: 3/30/2018 9:27:00 PM
Lovely are the memories you paint in your lovely poem, Subimal, and sadly, ones that you dearly miss. I enjoyed your poem and congratulate you on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra for liking the poem.
Date: 3/30/2018 8:01:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Subimal. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Date: 4/2/2018 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 3/30/2018 7:18:00 PM
This one is unique. I don't think many will be using earth as their smell but I find it to be a very refreshing one to write about. Congrats on your well deserved win, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Yes, that's the point I wanted to make. We are forgetting how nature smells.
Date: 3/30/2018 12:29:00 PM
what a wonderful take on the contest theme Subimal I love the fresh smell after the rain, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Date: 3/30/2018 8:08:00 AM
Very lovely, Subimal! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/2/2018 11:23:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 3/30/2018 2:19:00 AM
Petrichor of scots pinewood glades a mingling blend I have never forgotten, thanks for bringing back those memories for me Subimal, congratulations on your win... Mick
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/30/2018 2:33:00 AM
Thank you, Mick for visiting and for relating to the poem.
Date: 3/29/2018 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the wonderful win for this poem of petrichor ...
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/30/2018 1:30:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 3/29/2018 9:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal! I hope you have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/30/2018 1:31:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 3/29/2018 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/30/2018 1:31:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 3/29/2018 3:26:00 PM
I remember the scent of the good earth after a summer rain. It was a delightful aroma. I enjoyed reading your entry in my contest. Thank you for your participation. I was delighted to place in on the winners' list. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/30/2018 1:32:00 AM
Thank you, Sara for liking the poem and placing it. Yes, the scent of rain soaked soil is scintillating.

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