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The Scent of Earth

THE SCENT OF EARTH
Modern cities have grown in all possible direction Captured by construction, expanses of soil aren’t seen I live in a concrete jungle, our avant-garde creation An uprooted tree, at all times I feel suffocated within I wish so much I could go back where I had once been. I remember fondly the green hamlet where I was born On my eyes childhood memories hang like framed picture The grass-covered land rolled with trees to the horizon The land and the sky made for me an enchanting pair I grew up there imbibing the pristine elements of nature. After the scorching summer when the first rains fell In relief the parched soil sighed exhaling the scent of earth Embraced me with aromatic arms of nature I knew so well The scent still wafts in me, nobody in city knows its worth With the first rain I’ll return to a green land in my next birth.
February 18, 2018.
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Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Congratulations, Subimal. I've had the pleasure of discerning the smell of city environment and mountainous forest environment. I'll take green acres any day. Well deserved win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Thank you, Randy so much.
Haight Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Lovely are the memories you paint in your lovely poem, Subimal, and sadly, ones that you dearly miss. I enjoyed your poem and congratulate you on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra for liking the poem.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:01 PM
Beautiful poem, Subimal. Congrats on your win. Well done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Thank you, Line.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:18 PM
This one is unique. I don't think many will be using earth as their smell but I find it to be a very refreshing one to write about. Congrats on your well deserved win, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Yes, that's the point I wanted to make. We are forgetting how nature smells.
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:29 PM
what a wonderful take on the contest theme Subimal I love the fresh smell after the rain, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Canerdy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Very lovely, Subimal! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Talbot Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Petrichor of scots pinewood glades a mingling blend I have never forgotten, thanks for bringing back those memories for me Subimal, congratulations on your win... Mick
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 2:33 AM
Thank you, Mick for visiting and for relating to the poem.
Gupta Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations on the wonderful win for this poem of petrichor ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Thank you so much.
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal! I hope you have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 3:26 PM
I remember the scent of the good earth after a summer rain. It was a delightful aroma. I enjoyed reading your entry in my contest. Thank you for your participation. I was delighted to place in on the winners' list. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Thank you, Sara for liking the poem and placing it. Yes, the scent of rain soaked soil is scintillating.
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