Len Gasun Poet Personification

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17.01 pm Nov 4, 2025

 

Contest: Personally Speaking poetry contest

Sponsor: Poetess Nette Onclaud

Poem written Nov. 4, 2025

The Saxophone

his arms of tunes reel with most tender tones
reaching into depths of my senses
caressing night’s rhythmic flow
and my thoughts waltz intimately…I’m drawn.
as passionate timbre 
drones from his heated wisps
I sway with night's soulful music
hypnotized by his velvet drools.

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Len Gasun December 13, 2025 at 5:18 PM PERSONALLY SPEAKING Contest Judged: 11/5/2025 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place 3 (1-4 multi-w)

Karen Jones November 29, 2025 at 5:49 PM Belated congrats on your most deserved win! Len Gasun November 29, 2025 at 6:05 PM Thank you so much my dear poet friend! hugs

Sand Blown November 17, 2025 at 8:47 AM wowza man......got hooked on background tv background music as a kid.....good stuff .....len Len Gasun November 29, 2025 at 6:06 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind words my dear poet friend. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2025 at 12:01 PM This is really nice. Way to go on the winner list. Congrats Len Gasun November 8, 2025 at 6:52 AM Thank you my dear poet friend Andrea for reading my poem, your encouraging comment and warm congrats. Congrats to you as well! Hugs

Sam Kauffman November 5, 2025 at 10:44 AM Dearest Len, you have captured the heart of the soulful and winsome voice of the saxophone. I love how you "waltz" with it! Congratulations on your win my dear poet friend! Sending you blessings of joy! Len Gasun November 8, 2025 at 6:53 AM Dearest Sam, thank you so much too for reading my poem and your kind words/encouraging comments, also your warm congratulatory greetings. Congrats to you as well! Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith November 5, 2025 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading "The Saxophone" write. Great Picture Here You Have Here. I can almost hear the music. Hugs... Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away............ Len Gasun November 8, 2025 at 6:54 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. Congrats to you as well. We don't have autumn here dear. Have a marvelous week! Hugs