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The Savior Was He

The Savior Was He It's raining so hard The sound of the rain stabbing the roof sharply As if trying to bore a hole Wanting to penetrate Wanting to be felt. The wind adding the torture On the students eagerness to learn While the teacher trying to beat The rage of nature Through a voice which can never be heared. Stop the beating of the rain Nor groan of the wind Suddenly darkness came Rapidly like lighting Making the humans within the room. Shouted "Brownout!!!" What the hell was going on! Looking around, they saw A figure just by the door A silhouette as if. Telling them to run for their lives Everybody scampered to hide, Yelling...crying...seeking for help There was silence A voice was heard "I am the school maintenance crew' I'm here to help you". "Follow me...I have only one light for us." Slowly they stood up and walked lightly The savior was he.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:20:00 PM
Rosalinda, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/2/2012 12:39:00 AM
Wery well written story....good. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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