The Satan’s Daughter

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Written to be read sea shanty style; sang is best.

Imagine Quint from 'Jaws' reading this and you'll be on target.

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The ‘Satan’s Daughter’ always knows the way she ought to go
There’s no-one left alive aboard to haul her rigging so
Her crew and Cap’n flounder on the seabed far below
But the ‘Satan’s Daughter’ sails on for she knows which way to go

The ‘Satan’s Daughter’ sets her sails in fear of no tempest
Of all the fears of sailor men it’s fog she likes the best
Though never has a lookout seen her quickly turn about -
To head into a fog; but some have seen her coming out

Only one of these survived to rave about the day
The ‘Satan’s Daughter’ thundered from the eerie, misty grey
The Captain of the ‘Godspeed’ knew he had to save his neck
When an albatross fell from the sky and crashed down on the deck

He raved about a spectacle, he raved about a tentacle
He tossed his log into the sea encased in a receptacle 
So when they said, ‘Survived’, perhaps they might have stretched the truth
For when the ‘Godspeed’ sank his log was all we had for proof

The ‘Satan’s Daughter’ sails on unmolested as she goes
Unperturbed that somewhere there’s a flotilla that grows
Moving on, they had a face off midst the arctic ice
She watched those ships all go down in not much more than a trice

But what might be the spectacle and what could be the tentacle
Can a sailing ship ever be quite so reprehensible 
The ‘Satan’s Daughter’ came and went and soon we’d understand
As one tentacle… and then another… crept upon our land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/5/2024 1:23:00 AM
I’m with Tom on this Terry ….l too love tales of the seas and sea shanty’s and this is a beauty my friend….especially imagining Quint telling it….l loved his character! Really enjoyed this one! Debx
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Date: 10/4/2024 9:20:00 PM
Love tales of the sea, quite a forboding image you create Terry. Tom PS, is it too late to get a bigger boat lol
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