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The future wore a Sandwich Board and walked down my life's street day after day in the vain hope that one day we would meet. Upon the board were words it wrote should I look up ahead, the title read ' PLEASE STOP AND READ, FOR YOU'RE A LONG TIME DEAD'. 'Your youth is not the Universe, you centre of it all, there's only room for your desires within that selfish ball, beyond it lie the things of value, stretching into space, open your eyes and see them, for they stare you in the face. Those two who gave you gift of life, from that first tiny seed now fade and wither in return, more help from you they need. Take time, give thought, give love and deed for soon, as you will see their preordained time manifests, and hence they walk with me'. The Sandwich board passed by me on my journeys every day, my focus on the here and now meant I stepped out the way until the day I sat in black and then I could afford to spend some time wondering what was on that Sandwich board. For contest 'Regret', sponsor Frank Herrera

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Date: 10/18/2016 7:31:00 PM
Very profound, Viv, and so well-written. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra
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Date: 10/18/2016 8:33:00 AM
Nicely executed piece. Works well with the title and drawers the reader to its sad end. How often we leave it too late to actually be still and listen.
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Date: 10/18/2016 8:22:00 AM
Viv....I love it....beautifully phrased poetry delivering a simple, thought provoking message. And that title....that title will stay with me and keep this poem alive in my mind and heart every time I see a "sandwich board".
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:32:00 AM
Wow Viv, you really know how to make someone think deeply...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/17/2016 8:02:00 AM
Really love this one. Very origional.
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Date: 10/18/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thanks, Carol, glad you enjoyed my take on the theme. Viv x
Date: 10/17/2016 4:37:00 AM
This is in your face poetry, and you can't help but mull over what's been presented here. Great concept for regrets, got me thinking...(7 no doubt.)
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Date: 10/17/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thanks, Paloma, I'm sure you will come up with a real belter. Viv x
Date: 10/17/2016 1:15:00 AM
This is a very wise piece Viv! We all need to stop and take a look at where we are going instead of being sorry for where we end up. Parents are the jewels in our lives and we need to treat them with such importance. This poem is so well-written. An outstanding piece! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/17/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, like most of us, I could have done more. Viv x
Date: 10/17/2016 12:25:00 AM
Well penned. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/17/2016 1:40:00 AM
Very kind, Ravi, thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv

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