The Sandman Tip-Toes

The Sandman tip-toes into the room
  on that night when witches fly by on brooms

His task, alas, is daunting tonight
  with ghosts affright, jack-o-lanterns alight

Yet tired trick-or-treaters soon enough
  long for the comfort of their pillow's fluff

That's when the Sandman makes his move ~
  tender eyelids grow heavy, magic touch again proved

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Date: 10/20/2021 8:37:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... nice light hearted couplet of a spooky night finishing with the sandman calming the nerves - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 10/20/2021 6:40:00 AM
This is delightful, Gershon. It has a fresh, clever rhyme scheme, excellent flow, and exemplary imagery. Thank you for posting it.
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Date: 10/18/2021 1:59:00 PM
ahhh, this is so cute and clever. Very well done
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for the accolade, Andrea. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 10/18/2021 1:11:00 PM
I see that you are in touch with the reality of trick-or-treaters at night "Yet tired trick-or-treaters soon enough long for the comfort of their pillow's fluff" Nicely done.
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:35:00 PM
I think the parents are equally ready for the pillow after all the excitement.
Date: 10/18/2021 11:40:00 AM
Yes indeed that Sandman must be sneaky on Halloween.
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:28:00 PM
If I may see you and raise you one: That Sandman's got to be extra-sneaky on Halloween, methinks. Thanks, Kenneth
Date: 10/18/2021 7:20:00 AM
Oh yeah.....c'mon Gersh....we know that the "sandman" is you sneaking into the kids room to steal some Halloween candy......
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/18/2021 7:26:00 PM
Aw, John. Don't tell my kids, ok. Or at least wait until they're old enough to laugh about it. (Let's see my daughters' 43, my oldest son is 40,... LOL). Sa(n)d Sack
Date: 10/18/2021 4:15:00 AM
Yes, he does have a tough job on Halloween with all that sugar dancing about!! I indeed found it charming as well Happy Monday!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/18/2021 7:21:00 PM
I guess you've more than hinted at a new dance craze, Mike: The Sugar Dance. -- esp. popular with the Trick-or-Treater set. lol. Thanks, my friend. :) gw
Date: 10/17/2021 9:03:00 PM
I enjoyed this charming Halloween poem, Gershon. I loved the association of the Sandman with Halloween. :)
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Chris Conn
Date: 10/18/2021 4:42:00 AM
Until you realise who the "Sandman" is and what he does to people in their sleep.
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