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The Sand and the Sea

THE SAND AND THE SEA Looking through windows of the sand and the sea all you can find is what never can be all you can touch is her face with your mind all you can know is what you'll never find all you can have is the sand and the sea the look in her eyes, and what never can be. © ron wilson aka vee bdosa the doylestown poet

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/15/2019 2:21:00 PM

Oh my, so very sad and full of lovely, longing. Romantic. Excellent write. Ann

Eric Ashford

Date: 8/12/2019 10:45:00 AM

Enjoyed this one Vee, Its simplicity belies a much deeper thought. Well crafted piece.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2017 6:15:00 PM

Nice melancholy, sad but well written, enjoyed very much!