The Same

He swept her off her feet from the land of the spices, so she could spice his life. Years passed; her oriental richness faded. He was still cold and unchanging. He remained the same.

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Sara Chansarkar

Date: 9/15/2016 3:34:00 PM

What a waste of spice on a man with numbed tastebuds:(Its an amusing poem Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/16/2016 7:09:00 AM

Hahahaha....... Thanks Sara!! *^_^*

Tom Arnone

Date: 9/15/2016 2:47:00 PM

Spiceless man seeks Oriental honey.... Nice, Teddy! ;-)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/16/2016 7:05:00 AM

Hehehe. Thanks, Tom!! :-)

Joseph May

Date: 9/15/2016 9:30:00 AM

Congrats on your win Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/16/2016 6:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Joseph!! :-)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/15/2016 7:48:00 AM

Congrats, Teddy. Your poem makes me want to know more of the story. Agnes

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/16/2016 6:48:00 AM

Hehehe. I'll do my best to make them longer next time.... Thanks Agnes, for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/15/2016 12:00:00 AM

Mysterious and intriguing write, Teddy...!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/15/2016 2:38:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying it, Laura!!! *^_^*

Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2016 3:48:00 PM

oh how sad Teddy unfortunately over the years this happens in relationships - hope she left to find someone spice up her life!:-) hugs jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/15/2016 1:57:00 AM

Hehehe. I hope so too, Jan. Thank you for commenting on my piece!! *^_^*