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The Sailboat Race

The sailboats all line up For their annual sailing race This race always take place In the summer season At the beach called Big Lake A race like this last one week Whether rain or shine This race will continue All sailboats must return to start For the ending of the race This race gathers a crowd When coming to shore The first to reach it Will be the winner

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/27/2018 10:34:00 AM

Hi Darlene, I love the imagery, you put the reader in the heart of the poem. Such beautiful imagery. It would be something to see but you take us there with your words. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/27/2018 12:48:00 PM

Hello Micheal, thank you for the lovely comment. As i wrote this poem i could see the scene. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs.xxxxxxx-Darlene Enjoy your day.

Orochi C. Joshua

Date: 10/13/2018 6:38:00 PM

Fine imagery! Maybe it's a true life story. Aptly done

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/14/2018 10:29:00 AM

Hello Oeochi Joshua, yes this is true. When I lived in a town, my next door neighbour always went sil boat racing on the lake. It was fun to watch. Thank you for your lovely comment.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 9/29/2018 10:00:00 AM

Very nice Darlene! You took me there!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2018 3:14:00 PM

Hello Chuck Melugin, I am so glad you enjoyed the journey. \have a nice evening my friend.