The Safety Net

Her will is iron, baked in an ashy bleakness over eyes that were once bright

       –she longs to break. 

A thousand tears would evaporate on this impassible rage,
 
        she glares with dull purity of thought. 

Triumphant fists gloat above her potency, imploring 

      –she watches in scornful fascination.

Every breath rasps over the dagger in her throat, aching to be released. 

         she swallows harshly.
                                                 
  
                          -she spins her web in secret -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 5:55 AM
loved it but don't understand acrostic?Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Interesting writing. Sara
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July 21, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Beautiful write. Always, Cherica Lynn <3
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July 18, 2009 at 4:47 PM
Chilling poem! Good use of the acrostic for a profound poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Köhp Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Daffy, course you can send a poem! :)
Fraser Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 11:03 AM
Beautiful write Micaela>>James
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July 16, 2009 at 6:25 PM
Daffy, I'm in PS chat! :D
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July 15, 2009 at 8:08 AM
This is chilling! Epicness and acrostics! I've said it before, I'll say it again...you're so versatile. Also, it's surprising but you're just as amazing in short poems as in your novel-length ones. Your language again is amazing. :) Go, go Daffy! Love ya, Bugsy!
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