David Crandall Poet Rhyme

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For Your Choice B Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

The Saddest UFO

I'm not lying ;-)
I saw it flying ^v^
high 
       and
              low,
fast and sslloooowww,
in a saucer crying :'(
a Martian was trying 
to find a place to go, 
jetting to and fro ~~~> 
the saddest UFO ***
His girlfriend told him, "Joe - 
just get out now - go."

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Linda Alice Fowler January 14, 2025 at 9:11 AM Joe really had space fever, didn't he. A wise girlfriend to send him on a mission. Cute rhyme Dave. :)) David Crandall January 14, 2025 at 8:26 PM Thanks Linda. I think she told him to go to another planet :-))

Oliver Mckeithan January 14, 2025 at 4:19 AM LOL!!. Perhaps Mr Spock found his love. David Crandall January 14, 2025 at 8:25 PM haha - I hope so!

Hilda Greenhough January 13, 2025 at 5:31 PM I agree with the girlfriend. Keep away from UFOs.i like the fantasy read, very sci-fi. David Crandall January 13, 2025 at 5:36 PM Glad you liked it!