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The Saddest Smile

I watched as reason drained your face, frowns cracked to reveal a single tear buried under the layers I witnessed as the dye dripped off the cuff twin splashes of blue scarred my cornea’s I prayed as the colour drained from your mouth, as its corners found the downturn I cry as you dance to nightshade, always believing the rhythm would bring you back and smiling in Technicolour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 6:00:00 AM
There's a deep saddness in this piece Jayne, but so enjoyable >> James
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:43:00 AM
I kinda had a visual in this one,, enjoyed
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