The Saddest Love

We loved without regards to who did not want us together.
We disregarded their threats.
If I could have let go, I surely would have.
Now, I stand looking out the window in sadness.
Will the sun shine again?

It seems like I cannot come in out of the storm.
The rainfall is drowning my emotions.
My mind is with him in his tomb.
This is the saddest love.

Internal visages emerge, miens seen daily via her demeanor.

My life is a mess.
I have lost someone dear through no fault of my own.
I am left without anyone to depend on.
Lord, by your grace, I shall overcome the saddest love.

Depression is a lifelong malaise.
The visual inspiration given shows discontent.
Unhappiness she faces.
Her man’s life has be taken.
She is visiting him in his grave.
The saddest love has fasciae.
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Penned on MAY 13, 2014!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:14 AM
deeply engraved in its winning form, verlena.. congrats and huggs
Walker  Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Thanks Nette for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Roberts Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Congratulations Verlena ....Seren
Walker  Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Thanks Seren. Verlena
Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:36 PM
Congrats on the win my friend!!!
Walker  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Thanks for your congrats Robert. Verlena
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations Verlena.........Seren
Walker  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 2:06 PM
thanks seren for your supportive remarks. verlena
George   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:18 AM
Emoting such profound sadness. Many congrts on your win, Verlena. Lainie
Walker  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 2:07 PM
thanks elaine for your supportive remarks. verlena
Ponce Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 7:17 PM
Marvelous and gripping as always, Verlena. Congratulations!
Walker  Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Thanks Jake for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Lindley Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:30 PM
I to relate to this beautiful write. Life sometimes denies us that which we cherish most!! One can feel the sadness growing like a mountain in this very fine offering!
Walker  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Thanks Robert for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Bordner Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Sad love is better than no love Verlena. I admire the depth of your vocabulary. J.A.B.
Walker  Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 9:04 PM
You may just be right Justin. Thanks for your commentary and supportive remarks. Verlena
A   Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 1:14 PM
Hello Verlena, the second and last stanza broke my heart. This was, deep, and carries a sad tune.. Enjoyed stopping by reading your words once again....xox...Linda.
A   Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 2:21 PM
thank, you I'm here working on my few contest...:) gosh I got lost reading poems today..Linda
Walker  Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Thanks visit PD. I wrote from a visualization provided in a contest here on the Soup. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I paid you a visit recently and enjoyed my visit immensely. You roc. Verlena :0))s.
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