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The Saddest Love

We loved without regards to who did not want us together. We disregarded their threats. If I could have let go, I surely would have. Now, I stand looking out the window in sadness. Will the sun shine again? It seems like I cannot come in out of the storm. The rainfall is drowning my emotions. My mind is with him in his tomb. This is the saddest love. Internal visages emerge, miens seen daily via her demeanor. My life is a mess. I have lost someone dear through no fault of my own. I am left without anyone to depend on. Lord, by your grace, I shall overcome the saddest love. Depression is a lifelong malaise. The visual inspiration given shows discontent. Unhappiness she faces. Her man’s life has be taken. She is visiting him in his grave. The saddest love has fasciae. _____________________________| Penned on MAY 13, 2014!

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/26/2014 7:14:00 AM

deeply engraved in its winning form, verlena.. congrats and huggs

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/26/2014 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Nette for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/24/2014 10:51:00 PM

Congratulations Verlena ....Seren

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/25/2014 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Seren. Verlena

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/23/2014 9:36:00 PM

Congrats on the win my friend!!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/23/2014 10:28:00 PM

Thanks for your congrats Robert. Verlena

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/23/2014 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations Verlena.........Seren

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/23/2014 2:06:00 PM

thanks seren for your supportive remarks. verlena

Elaine George

Date: 5/23/2014 6:18:00 AM

Emoting such profound sadness. Many congrts on your win, Verlena. Lainie

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/23/2014 2:07:00 PM

thanks elaine for your supportive remarks. verlena

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/22/2014 7:17:00 PM

Marvelous and gripping as always, Verlena. Congratulations!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/22/2014 9:17:00 PM

Thanks Jake for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/15/2014 12:30:00 PM

I to relate to this beautiful write. Life sometimes denies us that which we cherish most!! One can feel the sadness growing like a mountain in this very fine offering!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/15/2014 12:32:00 PM

Thanks Robert for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/14/2014 8:50:00 PM

Sad love is better than no love Verlena. I admire the depth of your vocabulary. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/14/2014 9:04:00 PM

You may just be right Justin. Thanks for your commentary and supportive remarks. Verlena

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2014 1:14:00 PM

Hello Verlena, the second and last stanza broke my heart. This was, deep, and carries a sad tune.. Enjoyed stopping by reading your words once again....xox...Linda.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/14/2014 2:21:00 PM

thank, you I'm here working on my few contest...:) gosh I got lost reading poems today..Linda

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/14/2014 2:17:00 PM

Thanks visit PD. I wrote from a visualization provided in a contest here on the Soup. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I paid you a visit recently and enjoyed my visit immensely. You roc. Verlena :0))s.