The Saddest Day

I'd Love to tell you that im good
But im not
It'll be way easier if i would
But I'm already a dying shot

Whats left but this sorrow
This pain and despair
Its NOT going to be better tomorrow
I know you do care

But do you really?
Stay up all night and cry
Wishing maybe
Somehow I wont die

Are you on the other line
Waiting for me to pass away
Or are you wasting time
Wandering whats black and white today

I'll tell you whats
Black
Its the deep cuts
And all the needed ice packs

Ill tell you  
Whats White
Its the amount of blue
Storms,that broke my kite

All this insecurity of weight
Of What's black and what's white
Its the moment of faith
Thats taken a bite

My faith was to
Die today
And here i am laying beside you
With nothing to say

You dont notice my white skin
My unblinked gaze
That horrid smell,Not the bin
But its all a death phase

Let me rott between your feet
And watch as horror
As i let my soul free
To the grim reapers mower

Now i'd like to tell you that today 
Was alright
But its the saddest day
Of my life

(This is the First time I've Shown A Deep Cut Sight.Enjoy)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/25/2009 2:28:00 PM
The saddest day for me is every day that passes with lost opportunities. It eats at me and leaves these memories. I'll show you my cut, too.
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Date: 6/24/2009 1:51:00 PM
I hope your sorrow left you as soon as you`ve published those lines. Thanks so much for your viewing on my poem. Joy go with you!
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Date: 6/23/2009 4:06:00 AM
Sajdah Your Making Me Cry Love. [Broken Hearts] This Is So Powerful And Emotional. And Dont You Dare Think About Dieing On Me! Yah Here!? I Gotchu Girl! Ill Stay Up All Night Crying For You If I Need To. <3 Amazing Girl Absolutly Amazing <3 Booboo
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Date: 6/22/2009 6:52:00 PM
The emotion pours out of this poem! Great job! Thanks for complimenting on my poem! I appreciate it!!
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Date: 6/20/2009 12:12:00 AM
O.O wow. Thats deep. Im vair vair impressed :) I love love love the first few stanzas ... Charlotte x
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