The Sad Gardener

His seeds
Grew weeds







6th Place in A FOOTLE RETROSPECTIVE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/21/2011 2:59:00 PM
Nice work, Nick.
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:52:00 AM
makes me wonder, kids or plants or projects or.......read several of you pieces, really like them a lot. fantastic take on nature, love the one where you are required to continue to lay still under the tree and listen to the breeze.......i need to do that more often......
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:52:00 PM
Too funny, I go through this every year...and..wonder why?
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations Nick on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Footle Retrospective" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2010 2:48:00 PM
That would make any gardener sad. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:08:00 PM
Hey, I really like this one. I need to go see all the winners of this contest!! You earned a reward for sure with your footle. LUv, Andrea ps. I relate to this((even though yours might be metaphorical) because we are using irrigation water on our yard and I swear it has seeds in it from the mountains and is making horrid weeds pop up all over our grass!!
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Date: 6/26/2010 3:00:00 PM
That is good, I don't care who you are!! congrats!
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Date: 6/26/2010 12:50:00 PM
Well, must have been weed seeds he planted. Smile! Congratulations on your win Nick. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/26/2010 12:16:00 PM
I know him! Hes ME..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 6/26/2010 11:36:00 AM
Oh my, that is a bummer! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/24/2010 8:05:00 AM
You made me chuckle,poor gardener . .I have some good soil :)good one,hehe. .C
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:11:00 AM
Darn, that happened to me last year, Nick. Kept thinking the tomato seeds were sprouting but they turned out to be only wees -- not one tomato plant in the entire gardens. In the words of Bill Clinton, "I feel your pain." Well done footle! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:00:00 AM
LOL, another great one. Thanks for the laughs ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:53:00 PM
Very cool Nick.. neat Footle.. good luck.. am certain Brian will place high in his contest.. enjoyed... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/18/2010 10:39:00 AM
Loved it! I've stopped writing because I seem to have a lull in my creativity. Don't know why. Hope to be back on the track soon.
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:41:00 AM
LOL Too Funny....Great write Nick....Larry
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:45:00 AM
Got a chuckle...Felt empathy..Great write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:16:00 AM
Ha HA Ha HA HA...I Love this!!!!! Good One! Jeralynn
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