The Sad Gardener

His seeds
Grew weeds







6th Place in A FOOTLE RETROSPECTIVE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Benson Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Nice work, Nick.
Hayner Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 5:52 AM
makes me wonder, kids or plants or projects or.......read several of you pieces, really like them a lot. fantastic take on nature, love the one where you are required to continue to lay still under the tree and listen to the breeze.......i need to do that more often......
Mcgovern Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Too funny, I go through this every year...and..wonder why?
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations Nick on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Footle Retrospective" Love, Carol
 Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 2:48 PM
That would make any gardener sad. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Hey, I really like this one. I need to go see all the winners of this contest!! You earned a reward for sure with your footle. LUv, Andrea ps. I relate to this((even though yours might be metaphorical) because we are using irrigation water on our yard and I swear it has seeds in it from the mountains and is making horrid weeds pop up all over our grass!!
Culverhouse Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 3:00 PM
That is good, I don't care who you are!! congrats!
Freeman Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Well, must have been weed seeds he planted. Smile! Congratulations on your win Nick. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 12:16 PM
I know him! Hes ME..congrats on your win. BG
Conway Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 11:36 AM
Oh my, that is a bummer! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 8:05 AM
You made me chuckle,poor gardener . .I have some good soil :)good one,hehe. .C
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:11 AM
Darn, that happened to me last year, Nick. Kept thinking the tomato seeds were sprouting but they turned out to be only wees -- not one tomato plant in the entire gardens. In the words of Bill Clinton, "I feel your pain." Well done footle! Love, Carolyn
Tideswell Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 8:00 AM
LOL, another great one. Thanks for the laughs ~ Sharon :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Very cool Nick.. neat Footle.. good luck.. am certain Brian will place high in his contest.. enjoyed... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Palli Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Loved it! I've stopped writing because I seem to have a lull in my creativity. Don't know why. Hope to be back on the track soon.
Belt Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:41 AM
LOL Too Funny....Great write Nick....Larry
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Got a chuckle...Felt empathy..Great write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Clark Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Ha HA Ha HA HA...I Love this!!!!! Good One! Jeralynn
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