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The Sacred Child

The sacred child on the hill Buried deep but never forgotten River of tears Washed along into an ocean of deep longing Years pass by The girl becomes the woman Relationships begin and end Happiness brings a new journey A baby in the making Driving out old thoughts Touching her stomach in repentant hope Sadly, hope dies in the womb Guilt turns to punishment from above The sacred child on the hill Watches the figure coming towards her Slowly entering the river Washed along into an ocean of deep longing The sacred child on the hill Reunited for evermore..

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/29/2024 9:35:00 AM

Dear Paul, the poignant expression of sorrow, hope, guilt and loss is poetic and exceptional. A potent poem of deep emotion, riveting imagery and haunting resonance.. a sad beauty indeed. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paul Bell
Date: 2/29/2024 12:16:00 PM

Thanks, Susan, is a sad one.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/28/2023 6:53:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. Hello. This is extraordinary poetry in its entirety beginning with the title to which you never strayed. This entry of power gives pause and may I say you chose the right format of free verse to state your words and message. In my eyes this entry is powerful and gorgeous and one that must be read out loud with emphasis and feeling because the emotive factor is present. It was an honor turning turning to your page. Thank you for sharing your talent. Blessings (smile)

Paul Bell
Date: 7/28/2023 3:25:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Lisa, always a difficult subject to write about.