Paul Bell Poet Free verse

The Sacred Child

The sacred child on the hill

Buried deep but never forgotten

River of tears

Washed along into an ocean of deep longing

Years pass by

The girl becomes the woman

Relationships begin and end

Happiness brings a new journey

A baby in the making

Driving out old thoughts

Touching her stomach in repentant hope

Sadly, hope dies in the womb

Guilt turns to punishment from above

The sacred child on the hill

Watches the figure coming towards her

Slowly entering the river

Washed along into an ocean of deep longing

The sacred child on the hill

Reunited for evermore..

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Susan Ashley February 29, 2024 at 9:35 AM Dear Paul, the poignant expression of sorrow, hope, guilt and loss is poetic and exceptional. A potent poem of deep emotion, riveting imagery and haunting resonance.. a sad beauty indeed. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Paul Bell February 29, 2024 at 12:16 PM Thanks, Susan, is a sad one.

Lisa Ricci July 28, 2023 at 6:53 AM Good Morning Paul. Hello. This is extraordinary poetry in its entirety beginning with the title to which you never strayed. This entry of power gives pause and may I say you chose the right format of free verse to state your words and message. In my eyes this entry is powerful and gorgeous and one that must be read out loud with emphasis and feeling because the emotive factor is present. It was an honor turning turning to your page. Thank you for sharing your talent. Blessings (smile) Paul Bell July 28, 2023 at 3:25 PM Glad you liked it, Lisa, always a difficult subject to write about.