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The Rusted Gate

The rusted gate seemed to tell me a story as I heard the creak and squeak entering the windy cemetery... 11-7-16

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Keith Logan

Date: 11/7/2016 11:41:00 PM

Well, it is a whole lot better than that famous red wheelbarrow.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/8/2016 7:02:00 AM

Oh, I'll have to look into that one! Thanks Keith!:)

Christy Stover

Date: 11/7/2016 11:14:00 PM

I love it! Brief and enticing. Telling a whole story while leaving it to the reader's imagination. This is a true display of talent, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/7/2016 11:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Christy for your very nice compliment; you are very kind!:)