The Rush

Poetry has a magical style
Come and read it, then see for yourself
A free ticket to ride the world
Gaze within the wild wonder
When you feel what you see
Your heart gets a rush
Paint the canvas
Envision
Feel it
Touch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 12:34 AM
You capture the mood of the poetic mind so well Mitch.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Mitch. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 12:12 AM
Just had to smile when I read this, Mitch! You sure got it right with this etheree, so true about poetry! Congrats on your win! --nikko :)
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June 20, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
Spence Sr Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:55 PM
I love the essence of this poetry poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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June 20, 2010 at 12:02 PM
What an interesting perspective on writing! So creative. Congratulations on placing third in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your well-deserved honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Green Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:35 AM
That was puerile in style, written like seeing the world for the first time... great job.
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:22 AM
Great description of the magic of poetry. congratulations. on your win. Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 3:40 AM
Mitch, I loved how this was all about poetry! Congratulations on taking third place in my contest. LUv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Love the inverted Etheree...Great idea also..Sara
Chachere Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 8:38 PM
thats always true. poetry, and free write ingeneral, has such a powerful and mystical way to it. lovely write. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Neels Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 1:37 AM
Love it! rgds WN
Culverhouse Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 7:17 PM
We painted a mural for VBS last night and it was fun, your poem reminded me of that! thanks!
White Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 4:06 PM
A free ticket to ride the word (world) Ooops
Sweetheart Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 1:09 PM
A great rush to say the least Mitch... u have penned it well my dear friend.. enjoyed a trip into poetry land and getting a great feeling too all for free ... from Mitch Smiles.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 9, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Enjoyed it the second time even more. And than they wonder why I am so high off of life. Nice one man in White,..Sidney LeeAnn
Keys Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 9:17 AM
good feeling that gets better in time. thanks, chuck
A   Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Love it!!! Poetry sure has a magic which speaks to us in various ways, enjoyed your wirte..p.d.
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