The Ruining

You were "blood", & you had nowhere else to go. 
You were the brother of my love, how could we tell you no?

We welcomed you in our home, you and your "escorting" hoe.
He even got you a job, as you stated "I won't let you down, bro".

But no good deed goes unpunished, our sentence was not even deferred.
An Instant hell, we fell and we fell, dwelling in the stench of one little demons turd.  

My love, he lost his job, because, well Josh, YOU know EXACTLY why.
You ruined the life we worked so extremely hard for...you-the epitome of a big 'ole lie!

Our things were disappearing, but you, you thought you were so very, very sly.
On a golden pond of crescent stars, you were floating on a free moon pie...

My dress, my shirt, our conditioner and for God's sake, my deodorant too?
Was there anything else you forgot to take? Perhaps you'd prefer we send it to you?

My shirt jumped from my drawer, grew lil' feet and placed them on the floor...
Ran down the hall, scooping up my deodorant and into your bag they soared...

Your kitten, the one left in our yard, because of you, she'd almost died.
When we saw her deteriorating condition, it was enough to make one cry.

Poor little thing, you told us she would catch her own food outside.
One more being left in your wake, drowning in the storms from your tide...

Nine hundred dollars in fines, that's how much we paid to claim your kitten as our own.
Or the animal control would take her out of the misery of the only life she had ever known.

For a concerned neighbor, assuming we were responsible, was kind enough to phone,
and they were going to take her, & put her to sleep before she was ever even grown.

But I could not let that happen, even as now, we have not even paid our rent.
My love, because of you, he has no income, and we may all end up residing in a tent.

To think, one little brother could be responsible for these rapid, earth-shattering events,
leaving us a tumbling down alone, and for the next ruining, off you went! 

This down-slope of destruction, on and on, has yet to slow for us...
disturbing hatred now swirls inside my belly as this journey has been so rough...

Now YOU have the nerve to question to US, while attempting unsuccessful to act so tough,
The ironic cherrybomb, our sweet icing on the cake, you ask, "HAVEN’T YOU DONE ENOUGH?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/10/2016 11:47:00 AM
awesome poem Jill. LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 4:54:00 PM
JILL, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2009 11:12:00 PM
Forever the same... siblings... and only love is enough. Love heals. Congratulations, Jill, for your placement in Nathan's sibling rivalry poetry contest. Well done. Love, Dane
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Date: 8/4/2009 3:28:00 PM
Quite a passionate write here, Jill and congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest! If I haven't already said it, Welcome to Poetry Soup and I look forward to reading more of your writing!
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Date: 8/4/2009 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 8/4/2009 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations in yor win in Nathan's contest!
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Date: 8/4/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Nathan's contest Jill . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on 7th place in my contest! Nate.
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