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The Rudiments of Wings

Nurtured by love and parents’ guidance, Grown under the canopy of God’s wisdom; Midst material deprivation and indigence, He spread his wings far for an ambition. Hugging each day’s sunshine, rains and storms, With all fervor prayers flapping fast to heaven; By his unwavering sacrifices and determinations, Finally got his star… settled down all at haven. Feb. 24,2022 2:50pm This or That, Vol 10 Contest Judged: 3/2/2022 2:27:00 PM Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Place 3

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/2/2022 3:53:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Len:-) What a beautiful poem you've written. Well-done!

Len Gasun
Date: 3/6/2022 8:34:00 PM

Thank you so much sir Edward for acknowledging my poem. God bless you. Hugs.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/28/2022 8:00:00 AM

Len, so splendid! The title drew me right away. As an artist, my fave subjects at top of all are birds and angels. You appeal to me here with a learning into adult, winged flight. Your style, too, displays wings of expression, true, natural, taking to the sky so well sought.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/6/2022 8:39:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Sally for your uplifting words. Thank you for your kind support. God bless you always. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude. But i will try to catch up ok. God bless you always. lots of hugs