The Rudiments of Wings

An empty auditorium, echoing with the voices of those long past
Life’s stage, we the characters, parsing the script in a caricature of truth
Phantoms of a thousand different productions, acts, scenes leave the frissons of their presence
We strive, strain, stretch for the higher, brighter, better, betraying verity for vanity

Etchings in dust, the drive to impact the path we’ve trodden
Power like water within the grasp of a clenched fist
Clasping, gripping, seizing, you find nothing but droplets left in your open palm
Ignominy strikes the weakest souls, stretched threads of consciousness reaching vainly

We long to fly, seek to ascend to the forbidden, transforming into what we were never made to be
Transcendent, elusive, suffusing our epic odyssey of alienation
Logic is a casualty of success, empathy a victim of independence
Careening along a runway, the test flight, hoping for the rudiments of wings

2/21/22
"The Rudiments of Wings"
for "This or That, Vol 10" sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/6/2022 1:23:00 PM
Nice one Olivia with lovely imagery too, Take care, Gordon
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Date: 3/2/2022 4:00:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Olivia:-) Powerful, compelling piece. I loved the last line!
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