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The Rudiments of Wings

ones lifetime pursuit mind and heart are in dispute faith not absolute now arrives moment of truth trust in god or parachute This or That, Vol 10 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Tanka form PS 5/7/5/7/7 02/19/22

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/2/2022 4:04:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, David:-) This small poem packs a wallop! A delightful read, for sure.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/3/2022 1:59:00 AM

Thank you Edward, I fully appreciate your placement in such a thought provoking contest, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/19/2022 6:04:00 AM

Damned if you do dammed if you don't. Take a few risks or you'll have regrets. Just back from a week away hope you're keeping well David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2022 7:13:00 AM

I’ve taken my fair share of risks over the years Tom, this one is probably more about what’s exactly going through the individuals mind, in that split second when you just cannot be sure who’s in charge of your life, hope you enjoyed the break, I’m off in march for a week, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/18/2022 5:54:00 PM

WoW! David, You've penned such a well-written Tanka. I echo what Paulette said. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2022 4:28:00 AM

Heya Alexis, the things that might keep us awake at night, do we pray when pulling the ripcord, or simply have faith it will open, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/18/2022 4:00:00 PM

Very profound Tanka~"Trust in God or Parachute".....love it. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2022 4:23:00 AM

Thank you Paula, A question that may only be answered when pulling the ripcord, are we praying it opens or trusting that it will, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/18/2022 3:41:00 PM

WOW, David, what an exquisitely composed Tanka. Your poem captivates me and leads me to ponder. You encompassed all facets of human intrigues and inquiries in a few words and five lines. The final two lines summarize the life fight.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2022 4:19:00 AM

The poser Lasaad I suppose is when the push comes to the shove, do we really put our absolute faith in human hands or a Gods trust, thank you so much for an understanding comment, cheers David