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The Rudiments of Wings

It's impossible to fly;
            and yet, you kept on trying.
Of late, a tear in your eye 
tells me you have been crying.
                        Time's stolen your youth; that's true,
but there's naught that I can do
that will ease that loss for you.
      You once contemplated clouds;
            were comfortable in crowds,
                        and never spoke of death shrouds.
Yet now, you gaze at the sky
            and forgo dreams of flying;
      the rudiments of wings woo
            a spirit, sadness enshrouds.
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Bangalee Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 8:42 PM
JUST GREAT TO READ
Pinet Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Mahtab, as always, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Emile:-) Bravo on this exquisite piece! I love the format and picture as well.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 7:16 AM
Thanks, Edward, as always I appreciate your comments and the placement, my friend, Emile.
Miller Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 7:21 AM
This is such a beautiful poem Emile, I am so glad I stopped by to read it, thank you.
Pinet Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Thanks, Terry, as always, I appreciate your comments, you have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:19 PM
it has always amazed me how you make poets feel special by showcasing their forms so beautifully. This one using Dear Heart's form is especially exquisite. I could never have come up with such a unique take on that title we were given in this contest. This is sure to place high
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Thanks, Andrea, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:22 AM
“the rudiments of wings, woo a spirit that hope enshrouds.” This beautiful poem is filled with the knowing heaven awaits Emile. I love it! A fave from me! As I age and feel my winter years have grounded me from flying (literally and figuratively) this gorgeous poem takes on a special meaning for me. Make sure to share this with PFT if you have time. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Thanks so much, Connie, time keeps ticking away for all of us and it is both a curse and a blessing my friend, Emile.
Kyser Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 12:34 PM
very nice!
Pinet Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Thanks, Jeff, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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