The Rose - Poet's Dozen

The Rose - Poet's Dozen rose awaits the call to awake with coming spring promise for rebirth The seasons of all things hold much in store, for life brings death which brings new life once more. The rose relies on wisdom of its root to make it bloom when winter sets it free. And then in Spring, begins once more its fragile ride through life; with sun and rain and wind it must contend. And day by day its velvet petals open, spread out wide upon its leafy stem; all stages lead to fullness in the end. The tireless earth once more gives life; its promise does attend. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: A Poet's Dozen Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 11/06/2015 ================================= One modern Haiku: 3 lines: Syllables 5,7,5 A couplet: 2 lines Free verse: 2 lines English Quintain: 5 lines: Rhyming scheme ababb
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Merryman Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:41 PM
This poem flows so smoothly! Well done, Sandra! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your support. Hugs, Sanddra
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November 7, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Ebbs Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Congrats Sandra on your win :) "The rose relies on wisdom of its root to make it bloom when winter sets it free." it's very nice, you should add that your quotes :)
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Ed. I appreciate your visit, encouraging words, and congrats. Perhaps I will add as a quote! Sandra
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Great write and great win, Sandra, congratulations a 7+ :~)
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Lindley Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Congrats my friend on a fine win. I knew this one would place very high.
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your visits and support. Sandra
Cheema Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:19 PM
Lovely Sandra! Congrats on your rosy win! Love, Balveen
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Thankyou, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Nance Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Oh this was very nicely done. Every form grows together into a blossoming rose.
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Hi Casarah, thank you so much for your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 7:12 PM
This is one of the best I have seen for the contest. Also it would double for the favorite flower contest. I used an oldie and it was ROSE!!! I love this flower.
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I really appreciate your encouraging comment. Hugs, Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 3:41 PM
a floating melody of nature at her best blossoming, sandra... ohh so fine!...huggs
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 9:25 AM
BEAUTIFUL ... so very beautiful...7, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Thank you, Lin, for your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sandra
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