The Rose I Won'T Forget

The sun will rise and the sun will set
As a watch your fiery silhouette 
Of memories I cannot forget
Linger on with pain and with regret

That I could never ever find
A way to ease a worried mind
Twisted through the rings of time
The distance your heart beat and mine

I still see in your fiery eyes
In every sunset and each sunrise
Rain washes away our broken skies
Like petals falling off a rose as it dies

Of all the dreams I won’t forget
The sunrise will now forever set
Upon the rose I could not ever get
As I sleep beneath your fiery silhouette

The colors with the moon tonight
All have turned into black and white
As all my memories sleep tonight
Underneath your silhouette in the starry night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/20/2015 7:47:00 AM
Ahhh yes, I remember two roses I wanted so badly but was just not to be! Fate has a say in our affairs and often we dearly hate what fate says. Great poem but for me it reminded me of two pretty ladies I knew decades apart but each was a beautiful rose! Solid 7 on this one and a pleasure to read this morn!
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/7/2015 3:17:00 AM
I think we all have those special roses in our lives we had to let go of, thank you Robert
Date: 8/13/2015 1:40:00 PM
Such a sad poem of regret... memories that remain will sustain you. Marvelous phrasing, rhyme and imagery. Well done Cynthia! Best wishes, Keith
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/7/2015 3:15:00 AM
thank you keith our loves and losses shape our poetry
Date: 8/8/2015 5:54:00 AM
Beautiful Cynthia... very passionate write... nice metaphor~olive eloisa
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 8/8/2015 6:32:00 AM
thank you so much. :)
Date: 8/2/2015 7:55:00 AM
Better to have loved and lost ... ?
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 8/2/2015 8:06:00 AM
without the two together poetry would be very different
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