The Rose Hangs On

Thirty degrees and heavy frost
Of last night, killed the Impatiens
The running rose blooms and buds frozen
The Ginko is almost naked nearly all leaves gone

Only a few yellow strands
Left on the chilled branches
The white hoar's frost excentuates 
Gold beneath the mostly barren limbs

Air is frozen as breathe into lungs
Comes out as foggy drift
Too cold to linger for the warmth
Of the inside seems so appealing

Responsiblity calls for today
Is celebration Sunday at church
There will be dinner after service
Then an extra choir practice

It was a hectic day but refreshing
In its own way, renewed friendships
Sharing a meal with church family
Seeing people enjoy what I prepared

Went out to see the damage to plants
From the first hard frost of the season
Most tender shoot are totally gone
It is amazing though the rose hangs on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Nice piece Sara, golly you like these Ginko's >> James
Thomas Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 6:28 AM
Lovely poem, and I love the last line. Your love of nature shines through your poetry, and I enjoy reading every one of your poems ~Juliane
Shango Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Perhaps the rose is the human spirit. Thanks for your read of my poetry ... I hang too for that. Good write.
Kapoor Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 4:58 AM
Very lovely and nice Poem. Good description of frost and its impacts on tiny plants. Best wishes and love Ravindra
Strand Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 11:36 PM
Its lovely when I a flower clings on despite the climate.Rgds Brian Thanks for your welcome comments today.
Delacroix Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 7:56 PM
That it amazing indeed. Very nicely written. An open window to your day, your thoughts and what is meaningful to you. Great write! Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
Lopez Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 6:55 PM
another amazing write Sara. I love writtings on nature!
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 6:20 PM
First signs of winter I see Sara. Also here where I live, but winter has come in like a lamb. I hope we will not have many months of cold weather. Nice poem, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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