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27.02.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- The Rose And The Dandelion -


    A spectrum of colors
    adorned the garden of love
    Heavenly beauty,
    the rose has a timeless allure
    Tiny petals whispered
    romance in the garden

    A yellow flower,
    not from a noble family
    He focuses on
    a newly sprouted beauty
    She didn't misread the signals
    He was attractive,
    different from the others
    Humble and simple, 
    symbol of the sun
    The other roses turned away their heads,
    gave him a sense of insufficiency

    Love is much stronger than fear, 
    sometimes you must lose to understand
    Regardless of the outcome,
    the flirtation itself was a golden moment
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Beaufort Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Anne-Lise, you have a very interesting perspective on relationships and some of the potential outcomes of interactions with others. Very smart you are in this regard...smiles!!!
Crandall Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Ah, a great golden moment between the dandelion and the rose!
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 1:57 AM
- Thanks for your comment, David :) - hugs
George Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 5:05 AM
A beautiful poem with a very beautiful image. Your selection of images are always unmatched. Wish you all the best dear Anne. Love and hugs.
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 9:34 AM
- Thanks for your comment, Valsa :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 5:01 AM
Anne-Lise, beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest. -hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 9:33 AM
- Tania, thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 6:35 PM
All beauties all alluring but only one can be the right one. well said.. Blessings my friend
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 9:33 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Eve :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Gorgeous write, Anne-Lise! A yellow flower, not from a noble family…Regardless of the outcome, the flirtation itself was a golden moment
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 9:58 AM
- Kim, thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Singh Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Flower symbolism to explore themes of love,social acceptance,individuality and beauty of authentic experiences....very nice
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 6:27 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Akham :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Martin Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 4:32 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, besides the lovely imagery and sensual beauty of this poem, I envy your free verse form which I have never been to accomplish very well. Well done and best of luck in the contest. Kudos, Terrell
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 5:11 AM
- Terrell, a pleasure to see you on my poem, thank you very much :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 12:14 AM
So very beautiful poem!
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 5:10 AM
- Abdullah, thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Anne-Lise, you have painted a stunning image with your lovely poetry. I hope you do well in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 5:09 AM
- Thanks for your comment, Las :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Mckeithan Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Beautiful poem with a beautiful picture Anne-Lise. Good luck with the contest.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 5:08 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Oliver :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 2:11 PM
Beautiful flowers they are too Anne Lise, roll on spring. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 5:07 AM
- I love roses ... and dandelions too ... beautiful in their own way :) - Have a lovely weekend, Tom :) - hugs
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