The Rose

like a bee to nectar you rush
through the garden,
heading directly to the biggest red rose
in your path the tulip, vibrant and strong
in your haste for the beautiful rose,
you brush against the tulip, obliviously
knocking the fragrant petals to the ground  
you grab for the perfect rose cursing
to yourself as the barbs from the stem
cut into your ungloved hand
as you wipe the blood, from the vicious 
tear in your skin on your pants, you look down
at the dirt and on the tulip
now crushed under your boots
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bonin Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 8:49 PM
i appreciate this metaphor about love. i can truly relate. i am the tulip. i think that you captured the feelings of many. i really like your poem!
Fisher Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Bien Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:22 PM
thanks for the comments, Sue...no, never been to Maine.. :) JB
Mason Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Ah, what a sad ending here J.B. ... smile ... but excellent writing and a great selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. I know a J.B. who lives in Maine ... is that you? Anyway, congratulations on having your writing selected!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Very expressive, descriptive, and emotive write that is penned here in this week's featured piece. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week J B >> James
Rich Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:22 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
Brown Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week J.B. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 8:17 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest JB.Rgds Brian
Fraser Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 7:25 AM
The lovely Rose ventures again, this time by JB's penm a delight to read>>James
Bellefleur Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 5:59 PM
lovely - very good imagery - heading for a rose that can hurt and neglecting the gentle tulip which is overlooked.
Adeite Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 6:22 AM
wow! wonderful imagery in this piece. great flow of words, and a wonderful message
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 3:34 AM
Pretty:)
Carty Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Very clever, the quest for beauty and perfection! Lovely poem.
Orozco Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 11:51 PM
Amazing write! - jeremia
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