The Rose

The morning dew the night had spent in tears, and doubled low.  
But as the sun arose amidst the lofty plains, 
his tears caressed the Rose. 
The sweet perfume contained within the pretty head of petals, 
With a gentle gust of Summer breeze the scent was borne on the wind. 
-Naomi Rainbow-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Canama Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 1:12 AM
Wonderful imagery! I love the aroma of rose petals. Keep on writing!
Rainbow  Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Me too! Thanks for the kind comment. I love writing but it’s been awhile, so feeling a little rusty! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Naomi. Nice one!
Rainbow  Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Thanks Caren :)
Shaw Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:37 PM
That is beautiful Naomi, wonderful imagery, well written, kindest regards, Kevin x
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Lovely! Enjoyed :)
Rainbow  Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Thank you :)
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