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The Rose

The morning dew the night had spent in tears, and doubled low. But as the sun arose amidst the lofty plains, his tears caressed the Rose. The sweet perfume contained within the pretty head of petals, With a gentle gust of Summer breeze the scent was borne on the wind. -Naomi Rainbow-

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Date: 8/7/2019 1:12:00 AM
Wonderful imagery! I love the aroma of rose petals. Keep on writing!
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Naomi Rainbow
Date: 8/8/2019 2:46:00 PM
Me too! Thanks for the kind comment. I love writing but it’s been awhile, so feeling a little rusty! :)
Date: 8/6/2019 1:24:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Naomi. Nice one!
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Naomi Rainbow
Date: 8/8/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Caren :)
Date: 8/5/2019 5:37:00 PM
That is beautiful Naomi, wonderful imagery, well written, kindest regards, Kevin x
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Date: 8/5/2019 2:52:00 PM
Lovely! Enjoyed :)
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Naomi Rainbow
Date: 8/5/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you :)

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