The Root, the Tree and the Branch

The path progresses in a linear manner like a fallen tree trunk branching occasionally. Perpendicular cousins gauntlet the peripheral borders. Winter’s extreme nudity revealing an earthly crust, a spine of granite; a body desiccated of life’s fluids. Yet, the sparse, angular, forms retain their own beauty, dance in the shifting light. Upon the path man progresses, upright as the gauntlet of guardian trees; perpendicular as they; arms branch, fingers twig, calling down the gifts of Heaven. Summoning. The path girdles the Earth. Within the trunk of man arteries branch, capillaries twig; and bones boulder spines. The fluids of life flow in jewel tones, dancing in the shifting light. The Earth progresses, orbiting, girdling the sun as the Moon girdles it. Golden steamers of gas reach from the sun upward and outward on the path occasionally branching.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/15/2009 9:26:00 AM
i really like this poem, unsure how to describe it in my own words, but i surely like it. xo Rain
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Date: 12/5/2009 3:36:00 PM
I certainly like your extended metaphor and their unexpected uses as in 'arms branch, fingers twig', is very nice -- "The fluids of life flow in jewel tones, dancing in the shifting light." is also outta sight in that it takes us into that glittering faceted light -- the repetition of twig and girdles does not seem wrong although my eye tripped while reading along -- nevertheless, I confess your 'boulder spines' and reaching twigs summoning down the gifts of heaven, made me smile awhile ... nice
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:45:00 AM
This is a good one.Check out my poem Today is the Day.I did it different than what it was.
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:11:00 AM
Have a beautiful day and thank you for posting your fantastic poetry here for us to read Deb. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/28/2009 8:59:00 PM
darn that centre thingy, never works for me.. anyways, great poem you have penned, deep as heck...Debs your mind must be just bursting with imagination
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Date: 11/28/2009 7:44:00 PM
cool free spirited poem! Deb!....mail
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